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Need Feedback On My Tagline?
Posted By: OctopusJuice.com on 8/28/2006 11:02 PM (CST)	125 Points
Hello, First thank you very much for your input. I am a freelance SEO consultant and I have a website called www.octopusjuice.com. I take an existing website, optimize it to generate more traffic, more leads to the customer's website. My tag line is: "Squeezing More Juice Out of Your Website" What do you think?

Posted by: W.M.M.A.	Accepted Answer
8/29/2006 6:58 AM (CST)
I think it is very creative. I DO believe yo will have to do a lot of marketing to get people to know it is an SEO. And, that will be a big problem, potentially. octopusjuiceSEO.com would have been a bit different. I have always been a proponent of telling the client who you are, in your name: Jones Cleaners Bob's Auto Repair White Mountain Marketing Associates I would be curious as to the other responses you get. Randall WMMA

Posted by: OctopusJuice.com	Author Response
8/29/2006 7:07 AM (CST)
Thank you very mucg for the reponse. I provide not only SEO but also other services. I did not wanted to use a domain name with any keyword phrase, since i don't want to limit myself. What did you think about the tag line: "Squeezing More Juice Out of Your Website"

Posted by: vic	Accepted Answer
8/29/2006 7:49 AM (CST)
"Helping you squeeze out the competition"

Posted by: Frank Hurtte	Accepted Answer
8/29/2006 9:01 AM (CST)
I like the tag line and I like your site... there is a lot of useful information on your site... I am sure i will be back to visit it many times in the future.

Posted by: AlexBoyadjian88*	Accepted Answer
8/29/2006 12:47 PM (CST)
To build on vic's: Octopus Juice.com: Squeezing Out The Competition. With maybe a graphic of the octopus squeezing a computer or something along those lines.

Posted by: rwood*	Member Response
8/29/2006 10:39 PM (CST)
octopusjuice.com squeeze some from your website...strangle the competition. octopusjuice.com squeezing the web strangling the competition. octopusjuice.com, squeeze the web, strangle the competititon.

Posted by: Jo Masterson	Accepted Answer
8/31/2006 1:12 AM (CST)
I like it... I would keep it. Jo

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