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You can check out Dan Kennedy's "The Ultimate Sales Letter" book on Amazon.com.
But seriously, you may need to think about investing in an excellent copywriter.
Nobody knows your business like you, but an excellent copywriter will be able to dig in to your business and find your USP. This is the hook that answers the question of why should they go to YOU.
I'm thinking that you probably don't have a USP. Once you find out your Unique Selling Proposition, then you craft that into your headline. Your headline should be about benefits.
Email me if you have anymore questions. Best of luck to you :)
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