Know-How Exchange : Copywriting

Hey Michelle, here are a few ideas:

The XXXX specialists

Everything you need from A to Z

The "everything for your business" store

Your single source for XXXX

Also, some other words that connote "one-stop" shopping:

full service

soup to nuts

Depot

Storehouse

Warehouse

Mall

Super Center

I'm assuming that your looking for a potential name for your company which would set it apart, a brand name. This is a critical stage in creating a unique name in the marketplace. Although you didn't give me much to go on, here's a couple to toss to you: Everything Office, Shop-in-a-Box, or maybe, Business Basket. You might get more responses on this from the "Branding" forum. Or, provide a little more about what you're trying to create.

Hi ccoldren,
I think you can use A -Z Super store. Performance at your best. We meet all your needs. Check us out.

Hope this helps. This is an idea.

All the best,
Annmarie

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a quick question - are you primarily targeting new or relocating businesses, or are you primarily targeting existing, established businesses?

You need copy, I got copy.

What's in a warehouse, you may ask. At Shop, Office, Warehouse - Warehouse, you'll find everything you need to open your business for business. We've gathered an outstanding selection of business supplies, fixtures, and other materials to fill your space from the ground up. One place to go to start and run your shop, or office, or warehouse. Whatever your needs, whatever your budget, we've got you covered. Unsurpassed performance, that’s what you deserve, that’s what we deliver. From our warehouse to your doorstep, guaranteed.

It needs some input and polish.

From our warehouse to your roller door,
Pride in performance and so much more!

Hi, stranger!

If I had to pick one word to hang my hat on, it would be READY (instead of performance). Something like...

Business Warehouse
"Get ready for business."

"Get ready to open up shop."

"Everything's ready for your enterprise."

"Your company headquarters, ready to go."

Know what I mean? If I were more lucid, I'd probably have better ideas to offer. Maybe tomorrow?   ;]

Everything your office, store or warehouse needs

Your office / store/ warehouse launch pad

The launch pad for your office, store or warehouse

It's like a loading dock for your business

The one place for office, store or warehouse needs

The office, store and warehouse department store

Everything for offices, stores and warehouses

There's no place like this place, anyplace!
(Oops, that one's taken ...)


Copy Bits:

Everything you need to open the doors of your office, store or warehouse is right here, under one roof.

Ready to launch your office, store or warehouse? Need to update or replace your supplies or equipment? Don't run all over town when Business Warehouse has it all.

hi michelle

great response above. how about these...

"The SOW (Shop, Office & Warehouse) Universe"

"Shop, Office & Warehouse needs under one roof"

"Single Point Center for Shop, Office & Warehouse"

"We cover all you need for Shops, Office & Warehouse"

"From Nails to Lights, we have everything for Shops, Office & Warehouse"

(change nails and Lighs with anything you like)


hope that helps.

cheers!!

I kept drinking, and it didn't help. So then I tried taking a shower, which produced:

Business Warehouse
"Fixtures, furnishings and commercial supplies. All under one roof."

or

"Fixtures, furnishings and commercial supplies. Get it all here."

Please don't send me to the bathtub!   ;]