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Topic: Website Critique

Online Leather Jacket Retailer - Needs Help.

Posted by PattiFousek on 250 Points
Hi there,

I have a client who sells leather jackets for men and women via an online store - www.shorelinetraders.com.

The website has recently gone through a redesign - about 3-4 months ago - and has had very few sales regardless of our online and offline marketing efforts.

I have a few thoughts as to why the site isn't working, but would like honest feedback from others.

Please take a moment to visit www.shorelinetraders.com and give honest feedback to the following:

1. website design in general
2. ease of use/navigation
3. quality of product image
4. quality of product descriptions
5. purchasing process
6. what would you change to make the site better?

Thank you for your assistance.
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  • Posted by thecynicalmarketer on Member
    The site looks OK, a little dated maybe, and could sure use the help of a gifted designer. But rather than go into the details of layout, fonts, images, etc., which many of my very talented colleagues surely will, I would prefer to address the problem on a macro level.

    You didn't specify the volume of visitors to your web site. Yours could be a problem of generating enough traffic, or one of converting the traffic you already get into buyers, and these are two different challenges.

    For the first challenge, you, like everyone else, simply need more traffic. There are many ways to accomplish this. Paid-search (PPC) advertising is the fastest and most simple. Google is made for novices and you can be up and generating visitors in a few hours. Also, implementing a social media strategy is almost free and can drive large amounts of traffic. Set up Facebook and Twitter accounts and use them. There are many articles on the web on these subjects including some great information right here on the MarketingProfs web site.

    The second challenge is to convert the maximum amount of visitors to customers. Start with good web analytic software so that you can see the paths that visitors follow, where they are going, and where you are losing them. Then you can test and tweak your site using all the advice below (from others) to make sure you are on the right path.

    Lastly, like most merchants, you should create different personas for your customers (includes prospects). Leather goods are purchase by a very diverse group of buyers for very different reasons (e.g. to look chic versus rugged versus sexy versus bad-ass, etc). You should segment your offering and appeal to each of these groups in a different manner.

    Best of Luck, JohnnyB.
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  • Posted by PattiFousek on Author
    Thank you for your quick response Johnny.

    The site on average attracts a few hundred visitors per week. Most visitors arrive via organic search or PPC. We do have a Twitter and Facebook presence and have been continually engaging with potential clients.

    I do like your suggestion to create different personas.

    Did you happen navigate around the site? Did you find the site easy, or difficult to navigate?
  • Posted on Accepted
    It is rather dated. There's nothing really to draw me in - it looks rather generic. You're showing me pictures and high prices, but not telling me anything or showing me anything to make me want to actually buy the product.

    1) No testimonials from happy customers. $500 is a lot of money. Why should I trust you with all that money? Show me proof that other people are happy with your products and your service.

    2) The return policy is mostly about what you won't do. Will you help me if my order isn't right?

    3) Your product descriptions are dry and dull. Get emotional.

    Paint me a picture of how wonderful, soft, expensive and luxurious the jacket is. Tell me about the timeless styling, the great investment I'm making, how it will get even better with age... (Buttery leather feels so soft against your skin. And, it gets even softer as it ages. You'll be the envy of your friends...).

    4) You want me to sign up for your newsletter, but there's no indication of what I'll get when I do. Why would I want to sign up? Will I get discounts? Loyalty points? First notice of sales? Tips on how to care for my jacket? Fashion trends?

    Overall, it's not engaging. It's also not remarkable - there's no reason to remember it, talk about it, or tell my friends.

    Do something that makes you stand out (think Zappo's or LL Bean).

    Jodi

  • Posted by PattiFousek on Author
    Jodi, thank you for the honest response. It's exactly what I was looking for. My client does work with a marketing company who is supposed to help with the overall message on the website. We've been going back and forth discussing many of your points.

    Your response has been very helpful. thank you.
  • Posted by thecynicalmarketer on Member
    I agree with Jodi.

    Great resellers, online and brick-and-mortar, connect with their customers.

    Go to your local Harley store, or go to the mall and venture inside a Disney store, then a Holister store, and a few others. They create environments that resonate with their target audience. It validates who their customers are and reinforces the feeling that the customer has come to the right place - you need to do the same with your web site.

    JohnnyB
  • Posted by PattiFousek on Author
    Thank you everyone for your comments. I have sent all your feedback to my client.
  • Posted by Harry Hallman on Member
    The folks here have given you great input and certainly things you should consider. I think you main problem is the number of visits. If you only have a few hundred a week, you are not likely to get many sales.

    Yes the site is a little hokey, the copy is not compelling, but if nobody sees it doesn't matter. I would focus on traffic first and then make other changes.




  • Posted on Member
    Also noting that the question is closed, I agree with everything that has been said, but, to be very frank - I can find leather jackets of what would appear to be similar quality for considerably less. That would be a big reason you're not selling - if somebody is going to spend $325 they're going to want to try it on and really feel how nice the leather is.

    Good Luck!

    CVN

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