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Topic: Website Critique

Perceptual Aspects Of New Website

Posted by timberboxes on 250 Points
Questions: Does site make sense? Do you know what we're selling? Can you find what you need? Is it or does it have the potential to be compelling?

Note: only 1% of the content exists. There's a fair amount of temporary filler.

Also: how Responsive is it?

Site has been updated after being reviewed here three weeks ago.

See: https://gator3103.hostgator.com/~bell/
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Accepted
    (If you're asking for how quick it loads - it's quick enough. If you're asking how well it adapts to different size windows - it's not good enough.)

    My first impression is that there is too many menus to quickly figure out what to do.
    "BBQ: Dream It" might mean the act of cooking or eating the food. It wasn't obvious that Build It/Enjoy It was connected to the tagline. Perhaps adding the word "grill" to the tagline make help.
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Accepted
    Does site make sense?

    No.

    Do you know what we're selling?

    Not instantly, no.

    Can you find what you need?

    I'm not sure what i'm supposed to be looking for.

    Is it or does it have the potential to be compelling?

    With work, possibly.

    The seal is out of context. Are you advising people or giving them advice? There's a difference.
  • Posted by Moriarty on Accepted
    Well, it states "Daily Menu" so give me one! Really, if it's what you state, do it.

    For myself, I'm okay with the design - but do take your visitors lead in deciding what comes first (and more importantly, your customers - visitors and customers are not the same animals at all!) Find out what sells ... and do more of it, make it easier for the person to buy. You can only know that by putting it online and finding out where they go. Using some paid advertising (PPC) can overcome the dead-footed slowness of search engine rankings. You'll have answers in days not months. Plus, you can tune it to your profitable market within weeks.

    And as KSA says, the copy needs some tweaking. But as long as you're chatty and informative - and NO sales patter at all, you'll keep your visitors happy until they decide to buy. Or better still, come back for more!
  • Posted by timberboxes on Author
    moriarity: Fascinating idea..Daily Menu. But for every idea there's a lot of work. Can you imagine how much? [The Menu thing was my idea... just a metaphor building off Dinner Bell.] I plan for only dinner recipes. That narrows it. But for every day... that sure would be unique. And would amplify the brand to no end. But executing it..whoa. I'll think about it at half time. I'm curating the recipes. Maybe I can find enough contributors... great photography is required, which limits sourcing. But we'll see.

    I'm digesting all other replies [no pun], as well. Continued thanx to all.

    One curious thing I found is..You can find 1000's of pics of outdoor eating / grilling islands...just see G Images. But for custom jobs where's the prices? Where's the description of materials? So a guy reads my design post...then sees: "to find out the price and materials for this design... enter email. Nothin for nothin. Almost all social activity on the site has a click option to buy something or hand over an email.

    I believe the words blog, forum do nothing today... so putting them in the header is almost futility (for an e-comm site). Adding descriptions, below, sells people on why they need to go there. That's why I added Daily Menu. It's a magazine format that opens things up.
  • Posted by mgoodman on Accepted
    The homepage does not do a good job of telling a site visitor what you do or why they should explore the site. The most important copy is well hidden in the lower left corner of the page. below the fold:

    "Dinner Bell is a specialty BBQ resource. Whether you're a novice or BBQ aficionado, you'll find exciting, sometimes novel ways to achieve your backyard dreams."

    Meanwhile the banner is dominated by the seal that looks like it might be the top of a wine bottle ... and it's hard to read, with colors and shading that don't pop.

    Once you scroll down to see what's going on, there are six different places to click -- too many to make it clear what to do. (There are NINE options in the navbar higher up on the page.)

    You probably need to do some testing and strategic thinking before you go any further with website development.
  • Posted by Moriarty on Member
    I'll start with your comment "So a guy reads my design post...then sees: "to find out the price and materials for this design... enter email. Nothin for nothin. Almost all social activity on the site has a click option to buy something or hand over an email." - you can have a few "building blocks" with prices - perhaps even an interactive "build your backyard" app? That way they can get a rough idea of what it'll cost. Obviously it'll not include the installation and the groundwork (those are tough to estimate - but then, like the kitchen fitters, you could overcharge for this and take a few knocks without losing the bigger profits).

    Now as to daily recipes ... I have a daily "coffee time" email series. Now coming up with 25 emails isn't easy - and it's certainly something I don't do every day. But given a good mood, I can come up with a dozen or more ... half a month's work in the space of a day. Now that does work!
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Member
    HUGE RED FLAG: "You can find 1000's of pics of outdoor eating / grilling islands...just see G Images."

    WRONG! WRONG! WRONG!

    If another site owner owns a BBQ site on which they have images that they've created or paid for and those images appear on Google images and you then take my images from Google Images and use them on your site without seeking the express consent of the image owner you risk being SUED YOU INTO THE GROUND. Don't take images from Google Images. EVER.

    And as for the amount of work that it will take for this daily menu … well, it's called work for a reason.
  • Posted by timberboxes on Author
    No, Gary. No one's stealing images. The consumer looks at pics. When they start for ideas. But no prices exist, nor details, anywhere (for custom work). But they will exist on my site because I'm lining up several installers whose pics, prices, and other details they're sharing with me. It's barter - their content for free promotion on my site. I'll even do advertising on my site, local to them, to make sure they get enough business to justify spending time explaining their projects, especially if they're gonna play the extra role, at their discretion, as expert in the Forum. I'll only use contractors in geo areas where substantial visitors are coming from. And build a permanent archive of their pics, prices, materials etc.

    I agree with those of you who suggest data elements are not arranged correctly. Especially the current About Us belonging in the header, not footer. But I do not think 6 menus in middle of page is too much. I'm confident the eye handles 3's real well..there's 2 columns of 3. If I showed you 8 menus you'd say cut it to 6. LOL. But I guess I could get more descriptive on these menus to help understanding them quicker. I plan to test and adapt the site once people start arriving. In fact there's a lot of testing to do, generally. Including listening to people who pick up the phone.

    And I think the tagline needs final tweaking. Maybe no tagline. The Abut Us copy put in the header may work by itself. We'll see. The seal is too big, copy not accurate, and it needs to be far enuf away from the logo not to compete with it. It may have to go altogether if the header gets clogged up. All graphics can be kept and used somewhere else, some other time. Nothing goes wasted.



  • Posted by Moriarty on Member
    Gary - "And as for the amount of work that it will take for this daily menu … well, it's called work for a reason" - yet there are times and situations where you're more productive. Realizing this means being able to do a lot of work in a short time.
  • Posted by timberboxes on Author
    Goodman's idea about the header is the most valuable. Moriarity's Daily Menu to be executed daily was potentially another great idea but not practical in my mind. Tough to find 365 recipes. Also, in my mind no customer will make a dinner every nite by following a recipe. Too time-consuming and having to get ingredients without notice. My weekend menu plan works better. Thanx for all the help, once again.

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