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Clever Way To Say "services Offered"

Posted by ACPUMPKIN on 10/23/2014 at 7:52 PM ET 250 Points
I am looking for a clever and creative way to say "Our services include"
This is actually for a medical provider. Any help would be appreciated
thanks.
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  • Posted by mgoodman on 10/23/2014 at 9:02 PM Accepted
    Why would you want a clever way to say something as clear as "Our services include?" Are you trying to hide something?

    "We provide ..:"
    "When you need ..."
    "Specializing in ..."
    "Experts in ..."
  • Posted by ACPUMPKIN on 10/23/2014 at 10:47 PM Author
    Not trying to hide anything. Just looking for a unique tag line before listing our services
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 10/24/2014 at 8:33 AM Accepted
    If the wording's for a tagline, then you're likely best to test us more about your company. It's name, who you sell to, and some unique benefits you offer. "Our services include" isn't a good phrase for a tagline, in my opinion.
  • Posted by telemoxie on 10/27/2014 at 8:12 AM Accepted
    omit unnecessary words.

    Consider: if your goal is to provide a list of services, might not that list be self explanatory?

    Example: the tagline for "5 Guys” is “burgers and fries”

    They don't have to say something like, "our services include burgers and fries" or "we provide burgers and fries".
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on 10/27/2014 at 3:18 PM Accepted
    Forget being clever. Simply tell people what you do, who you do it for, and how what you do will help the people you help.
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