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Topic: Taglines/Names

Help Me With My Tag Line..please :)

Posted by vallie1027 on 1/23/2015 at 12:18 PM ET 125 Points
Hello! I'm trying to come up with a tagline for my Etsy shop. The store name is "Buy Me A Present" and currently we have a tag line of "beaded bracelets and metal stamped jewelry" in order to describe what it is that we sell.

I was thinking of something different like...there's no time like the present to buy a present, but that sounds kind of silly.

I would love any suggestions you can offer.
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 1/23/2015 at 3:09 PM Accepted
    Since "Buy Me a Present" doesn't really say much about what you offer or to who, your tagline needs to make it clearer. Beaded bracelets & metal stamped jewelry is your menu, but says nothing about its uniqueness (handmade? rare metals? award-winning?) nor beauty (who would like what you're selling)?
  • Posted by vallie1027 on 1/23/2015 at 3:20 PM Author
    Thank you for the feedback! I agree, I think I definitely need to add handmade in there at the very least.
  • Posted by mgoodman on 1/23/2015 at 6:02 PM Accepted
    Because the name is not helpful, you need your tagline to do all the work. Don't try to be clever. Just tell folks what you are selling.

    "Handcrafted Jewelry She'll Love"
  • Posted on 1/27/2015 at 2:23 PM Accepted
    "Handmade treasures for someone special"
    "Handmade treasures for you and yours"
  • Posted by vallie1027 on 1/27/2015 at 9:45 PM Author
    Thank you all so much!
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