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Topic: Copywriting

Refer - A - Friend Wording

Posted by Anonymous on 2/4/2007 at 6:16 PM ET 125 Points
I want to offer my cusdtomers a gift voucher for referring a friend but I am struggling a little on the wording, this is what I have so far.

Refer -a-Friend and save money yourself
Recommend blah-blah to a friend and get a 10% discount for them and a gift voucher for you!

Thank you for choosing blah-blah for your window tinting. We’re sure you’ll be pleased with the new look of your vehicle.

In the meantime, if you know of anyone who would benefit from our window tinting service please pass them this portion of this card. This will entitle them to an instant 10% discount on any work we do for them - and we will give you a £15 gift voucher for M&S as a thank you for referring us.


I welcome any additions to the above.

Nick


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  • Posted on 2/5/2007 at 5:06 AM Accepted
    Friends- You Have Shared many a Pint. Now share a Tint.
    10% off for your friend. Gift Voucher For You.

    Tinting Referrals will give you a gift voucher.
    And your friend will get 10% Off.

    Tint-a-Refer Offer- 10% discounts for referrals & Surprise Gift for you.
  • Posted by Tracey on 2/5/2007 at 11:53 AM Accepted
    Refer a friend and you both win!
    You receive a gift voucher, your friend gets 10% off.
  • Posted on 2/7/2007 at 9:49 AM Accepted
    This is such common ground (the blah, blah you mentioned), maybe you are open to spicing it up a bit so it becomes more memorable and funny?

    Friends don't let friends drive without tint! Refer and friend and you both get a....

    Help a friend cool their car inside and out. Your friend gets 10% off when they bring in this card and we'll send you x

    Beat the Heat Special! Refer a friend a you get a $10 gift card and your friend gets a cool 10% off.

    Need cooler friends? Tell them to get a "Name of your Company" tint job. When they mention your name, they get 10% off and we'll send you a $10 "insert local grocery store" gift card. (these can be a safe bet for mass appeal)

    Tired of baking your buns on your buddy's hot car seats? Refer friends to get a tint job with us and they get 10% off and we'll send you a $ gift card.

    Warning: In the next 10 days, your car will experience Tint-Envy from your friends. When you do, simply hand your friend this card so they can get a cool tint-job too! We'll send you a $ card for every referral.

    Refer a friend and ride easy in your friends car this summer....

    Spring Special! Refer a friend to beat the heat of the summer tint-rush....

    Good Luck!
  • Posted on 2/7/2007 at 6:08 PM Author
    Thanks to all for your efforts - I am leaning towards one of Jens suggestions.

    I think I will go with this

    "Warning: In the next 10 days, your car will experience Tint-Envy from your friends. When you do, simply hand your friend this card so they can get a cool tint-job too! We'll send you a $ card for every referral."
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