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Topic: Website Critique

Can Someone Look At My Web Site And Give An Opini

Posted by Anonymous on 4/5/2005 at 5:49 AM ET 250 Points
Can someone pl look at my web site and give a critique.
I am a small company and I am getting many clicks but few leads. I am disappointed at the professional who desgned the site because I think its fairly basic and needs more updating. I need advice on ad words also.
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  • Posted by Pepper Blue on 4/5/2005 at 1:44 PM Accepted
    Hi,

    Too much block text, you need bullets, people don't read the way you have it formatted.

    List features and benefits, why they should move to the next level of involvement.

    Limit the information, make it more compelling for them to call you. Less is more.

    Specifically, what kind of advice do you need on AdWords? Google has everything you would want to know right here:

    www.adwords.google.com

    I hope that helps.

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