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Please Critique Presentation Folder + Overview

Posted by nchazan on 1/21/2009 at 8:38 AM ET 50 Points
Please critique my "almost ready for print" presentation folder and accompanying overview brochure cover. Use your imagination to follow the fold and cut lines please ;)

P.S brochure is a 6x6 square with a wrap-around cover image as shown here.

Mainly, is the layout of the folder good as far as the logo is concerned? secondly, do you get the idea of what kind of company we are and what products or services we provide?

Thanks!

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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 1/22/2009 at 9:20 AM Accepted
    The logo gets hidden in all the graphics (especially on the cover). Can you lighten the background graphics to bring out the logo (or can you lighten the shadows under the desks to increase logo contrast)?
  • Posted on 1/23/2009 at 9:30 AM Member
    I personally love the design - very cool. The only critique I'd give is to the handwritten font. I had a very hard time trying to decipher your web address - I later got it from the interior of the piece. Good luck!
  • Posted on 1/23/2009 at 10:21 AM Member
    I like the design. If you want to keep the web address on the photo I would not keep it as a handwritten font.... it's too hard to read.
  • Posted by nchazan on 1/23/2009 at 11:09 AM Author
    I'm questioning my inner left flap. Is this an area where I should put some more descriptive text or leave blank or what? any good suggestions from the graphic design folks?
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