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I'm Looking For A Fall Tag Line/subject Line!

Posted by ambernikol on 9/18/2012 at 11:19 AM ET 50 Points
I'm looking for a fall line that I can use for my photography business. I'm putting out a newsletter that will be e-mailed to my clients. Looking for a subject line to grab their attention and continue reading. I'd like something to do with fall and something catchy. Any ideas? Thank you!
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  • Posted by marketbase on 9/18/2012 at 1:03 PM Member
    Lots of questions:

    What's going on during Fall that your clients would be interested in knowing about? Discount? Special package deals? Different settings? Pets? Families? Singles? Couples? Buldings/Architecture/Locales?
    What's your newsletter's name? Business name?
  • Posted by ambernikol on 9/18/2012 at 2:01 PM Author
    Thanks for the response!
    Well I have a mini session special going on right now, holidays are coming up so I always advertise families to book their holiday portraits now so that they can have the pictures for christmas gifts, etc to use.
    I do portrait, children, seniors, couples, weddings, engagements, families, babies, and pets and my newsletter is my business name. Basically what I am looking for is a subject line that is fall related, like "Fall into our special" (that's really dumb but you get the idea..lol) That will capture someone's eye and then read a little bit more that will say what I am offering, etc for this time of year. I'm really bad at coming up with a catchy line to get people to read more. So I'm looking for an idea that has something to do with fall, the holiday coming up, etc.
  • Posted by marketbase on 9/19/2012 at 11:46 AM Accepted
    For consideration:

    [Cool] or [Crisp] Autumn Photography Specials to Fall Into

    Good luck!
  • Posted by ambernikol on 9/19/2012 at 2:35 PM Author
    Yes, headline would be right. Thanks!
  • Posted by SteveByrneMarketing on 9/19/2012 at 4:17 PM Member
    "schedule your family holiday portraits - early bird specials"

    Of course, you will need to create the early bird specials, the earlier the bird - the better the special.
  • Posted by cookmarketing@gmail. on 9/19/2012 at 5:22 PM Member
    To stand out among the crowd, toss in - At Your Home photos...no need to compete with the standard chains.

    Kinda' like joining pop-up retail
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