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Help To Improve On My Tagline

Posted by collinseow on 8/11/2014 at 5:30 AM ET 25 Points
My tagline now :A stockbroker who educate you how to invest wisely with a time-proven system.
I would like to ask all the experts here how can I improve or make it more concise?
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 8/11/2014 at 6:38 PM Accepted
    Your potential clients likely aren't interested in education. They're interested in results. Can you state something like: "On average, my clients have earned 15% annually"?
  • Posted by peg on 8/12/2014 at 6:27 PM Accepted
    If you can say this legally, then ...

    Proven system for positive returns.
    Or
    Helping investors earn more for X years.

    OR, if legal restrictions prevent you from making profit claims, then something such as

    Your trusted investment expert.
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