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Topic: Taglines/Names

Tagline For Www.spainpoland.com Booking Portal

Posted by Anonymous on 250 Points
Hello,

I'm about to create multilingual portal for bookings of Spa services in Poland- [inactive link removed].

I would kindly ask you to help me find appropriate tagline (max 23 characters) for English language version.

I would like it to inform about the character of the portal (online booking platform for most of SPA hotels & resorts in Poland, many useful information for travellers etc.) and be connected with SPA philosophy (if possible?).

I know it is difficult to make it so short but hopefully we will find something "straight into the point".

Thank you in advance for your kind help.



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  • Posted by philip1957 on Accepted
    HEALTH THROUGH WATER....
  • Posted by Chris Blackman on Accepted
    You might be better off with a name like www.PolandSpa.com if available. SpainPoland sounds like a bilateral friendship organisation between lovers of Spain and Poland.

    Wow. 23 characters is not much space...

    Tagline ideas:

    "Get you into hot water"
    "Bathe with us"
    "Spa & Polish" (A play on the idomatic term "spit & polish")
    "Healing Waters"
    "Escape now - Spa Poland"

    and...

    "Quit Chopin around..."

    (sorry, I just couldn't help myself!)

    Hope one of those helps...

    ChrisB

  • Posted by adammjw on Accepted
    Welcome to the forum,

    I must say that your website name is a bit confusing. At first glance I thought it's about Spain and Poland networking.
    As to tagline first off you have to decide what's your main focus; it cannot express everything. What's going to be unique about your booking service? Is it the only one, the most sophisticated, the fastest to book online, the cheapest, the most secure?
    Tell us more please.

    Regards

    Adam
  • Posted on Author
    Hello,

    Thank you very much for your quick responses.
    Unfortunatelly PolandSpa.com as well as spapoland.com are already sold.
    The other sounding similarily is spapoland.pl- this domain also belongs to me, but I'm not sure if Polish ".pl" will be popular among foreign tourists.

    When it comes to the tagline:
    I love taglines like easyjet's "come on! let's fly" or British activitybreaks.com- "2 clicks and you're away" which are very personalized.

    This is what I'm lookig for- short and fresh with "a little spa inside".

    My key selling points are: wide range of spa offers, flexible search options, immediate confirmation, secure transactions.

    Thank you
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    No-hassle spa booking
    One-stop spa-booking
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    Your health break ... clicks away( a bit more than 23 char.)
    Spa breaks ...clicks away
    Book & relax
  • Posted on Author
    ...clicks away sounds good.
    But the first part?

    Any other ideas?

    Please remeber that it will be located just under www.SpaInPoland.com address so should not include words like Spa, Poland.

    Book & relax- there is a popular portal healthandrelax.pl owned by my friends so it sounds too familiar:)

    Thanks for your help so far
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    Well the spa concept is all about health,relax& beauty so you're pretty close to your friends anyway.
    Getting back to the core.......

    Getting fit is only... clicks away
    Health farms at your finger clicks
    .. clicks and you're as good as new

  • Posted on Author
    Any other ideas?
    I'm trying to collect as many taglines as possible before I will choose the right one.
    Thank you for your kind help
  • Posted by Deremiah *CPE on Accepted
    Hi Office,

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    They take the matter lightly. And let me be the first to say that I am probably one of the most "Playful and Humorous" of all the experts here so being light has it's advantages...(click my name profile. Read some of the questions I've asked and you'll see). My degrees in ART & Accounting make me a cross between Leonardo da Vinci & Michelangelo. And while my prolific ability could allow me to create for you nearly 10-20 variations on a name I respect that the process is more than just "Name Generation". So making the right choice of a good quality name that will bring you much goodwill is not a light matter. ***So don't you take it lightly either*** and make the mistakes most people do.

    So here's some research I've just pulled together for you to help you avoid the aweful blunders people make in name choosing and tagline creation. I reference other experts on our forum as I have learned so much about the process of creating powerful names and taglines from them through the past several years. It's full of some questions that will help you think more clearly about the process so that you can have a successful name that will make a difference first to your customers and then to your company. The only real reason why anyone goes into business anyway is to ---Take Great Care of a Customer---. If you take care of a customer your customer will take care of you :- )

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    Most people fail to do the above even though we highly recommend it because it's so much easier to let others do the work and you can always blame your failures on them RIGHT! But the right information really does make a huge difference for you and that's what you really want in the end right?...

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    A business name should be the out growth of the market you are trying to reach. All names including "A new business name or Tagline" must have some part or a lot of the following comments also made by my three expert friends who participate in our forum below.


    williamarruda says…
    "Your tag line should be 'catchy' and it should speak directly to your target audience and differentiation. A good place to start is to make a list of all the things that differentiate your offerings from your competitors. Then think about which of those differentiators is compelling to your target audience."

    mgoodman...
    provides these great suggestions...
    "Who is the target audience? That's the most important input we need in order to help you with the name. Once we understand who the target audience is, the next question will be "What is the most important benefit they will realize if they use your service?" What makes you different from and better than your competitors?"



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    offers a great deal of insight on this...
    "To really be successful with this query in KHE, your query demands answers to a number of questions regarding your product that will help guide the naming process:

    -What ARE your USPs? Why would someone go to you v. any of the other businesses?

    -Where are you located?

    -What are the short- and long-term business goals for the company, and how are you going to market this new brand in a very large arena with few real players?

    -What are your company’s Core Proposition and Brand Personality?

    Core Prop: What makes you different? Tagline. USPs in a phrase.

    EXAMPLE:

    Bounty: The quicker picker-upper.

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    This will get us started. By completely answering these questions it would make it much easier to provide you with a name that provokes your clientele to seek your business out over the others. REMEMBER... our only real problem in life is our failure to be "MORE Creative" than we’ve ever been. If you “Invent” your opportunity YOU WILL most definitely create your future. I'm only an email away from you if you need my help. Is there anything else I can do for you?

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  • Posted on Accepted
    how about "1 click away from luxury"?
  • Posted on Author
    Ohh,this one is nice. However I would exchage luxury for some other- more friendly word.
    Luxury sounds very expensive and closed to some group of people.
    I would not like to send away any guests just at the beginning

    And also what I'm wondering is the number of clicks. Actualy it will be 4 clicks to book but I'm not sure if "4 clicks..." sounds ok. What do you think?
  • Posted on Member
    Wow, thanks! How about these?

    "Click your way to bliss" or "2 clicks to bliss" or "A few clicks from bliss" or "A few clicks to bliss"

    I like "bliss" - because "bliss" doesn't have to be expensive.

    As far as the number of clicks - it will depend on if the number of clicks should be how many actual clicks to book (like you mentioned, "4 clicks") or how many clicks it would take to find the perfect spa.
  • Posted on Author
    Maybe exchange luxury with a word connected with mental relax, feng shui etc?
    Thx for you ideas
  • Posted on Author
    What means bliss? I don't know the word. I'm sorry

    Can you please explain?
  • Posted on Member
    bliss is a feeling of relaxation, contentment, peaceful. Here's what dictionary.com says, "supreme happiness; utter joy or contentment"
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    Bliss is very good.
    4 clicks is too many. Experts say it should not go beyond 3.Amzon has it in 1 click!
    So I suggest either a few or a couple.
    You might also consider " wellbeing" or "Shangri-La"

    Adam
  • Posted on Author
    one click is "find", second "add to basket", third "confirm choice" and fourth is "confirm payment".
    I think it is more on Amazon.com Am I wrong?
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    You got a 1-click option there if you're a registered buyer.
    Anyway skip it for the moment
  • Posted on Author
    I was trying to combine your suggestions and created a mix of all. How about "Your pleasure is only clicks away" ??
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    Actually " pleasure" does not click with me.
    Keep it coming and contemplate the options, the second part looks and sounds ok.
  • Posted on Author
    Your wellbeing is only clicks away?
  • Posted on Author
    Wellbeing break...clicks away ??
  • Posted by adammjw on Member
    It does not sound too good.
    I would prefer health break treats........
  • Posted on Author
    Thank you all for your kind help.
    Best regards
  • Posted on Author
    FYI
    I have listened to your suggestions and purchased not only a domain www.spainpoland.com but also www.spapoland.com.
    Portal will be also available under Polish www.spawpolsce.pl, Swedish www.spaipolen.se, Danish www.spaipolen.dk, Russian www.spavpolsy.ru, German www.spainpolen.de.
    You're welcome to visit one of the spa hotels in Poland!!

    And wish us luck!

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