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Topic: Taglines/Names

Hotel Requests Help For Brochure Headings

Posted by Anonymous on 4/23/2009 at 1:33 PM ET 250 Points
I am writing the brochure and web site for our new hotel schedule to open in December 09 and would like ideas for headings other than the usual:
The Hotel
The Rooms
The Restaurants
The Bars
The Amenities
The Staff
The Town
The Rates
and Reservation
Thanks for sending your thoughts; new to the forum and have read interesting stuff so far...like the use of Gerunds and to phrase it from the other person's perspective, etc.
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 4/24/2009 at 9:21 AM Accepted
    If the names are too obscure, people won't immediately be able to navigate their way on your site.

    Here are some other words to try on: "The Experience", "First Impressions", "Pampered Guests", etc.
  • Posted on 4/24/2009 at 9:35 AM Author
    Thank you both, great to hear it form the KHE experts.

    Phil: Thanks for reminding me about the distinctions between "The" and "Our"; "Our" is much more inclusive, participative.

    Jay: I am looking for something different and your input is sending me in the right direction.

    Any more suggestions out there?

    Will post the final decision at www.cabannacabarete.com in a few weeks.

    Roch
  • Posted on 4/26/2009 at 1:39 PM Accepted
    Hi, Roch!

    Thanks, for putting such thought into your brochures!

    You're adding value before they even step through the door. :O)

    Here are some ideas:

    Nice to see you!
    Rest, a while.
    Might we suggest a special main dish?
    Or, maybe something . . . stronger?
    Your choice of obsession . . .
    Jo knows all the best shops!
    The Near, The Far, And The Adorable
    Request For Appreciation
    When shall we pencil you in?

    I suspect you're looking for something that sounds more like a playful and respectful conversation involving someone with whom you realize you're getting along famously!

    I see you shaking hands with clients who feel like they've already met and decided to like you!

    Sunshine & Blessings,
    Giovani
  • Posted on 4/27/2009 at 11:27 AM Author
    Giovani: I really enjoyed your comment and appreciate your kindness and generosity.
    Thank you!

    And thanks to all for a great help.

    Roch
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