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Need Tagline For A Poster (dental Clinic)

Posted by Anonymous on 6/23/2009 at 2:10 AM ET 250 Points
hi gurus,

I'm newbie and making poster for a dental clinic.

Below is the poster design, highly appreciate your inputs!
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I'm considering some of these:
Blue Sky, Cheeky Smile
Stun the sky with your smile!
Finding your true smiles here
Where smiles become wonders
Skyline journey to a stunning smile
Our Sky of your smile
Smile without reservation
Never underestimate the Smile
Leong Dental, Where Wonders Smile

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  • Posted on 6/23/2009 at 4:56 AM Author
    Hi, another artwork and tagline for your kind crique!

    https://www.flickr.com/photos/11348309@N05/3652871329/in/photostream/

    many thanks...
  • Posted on 6/23/2009 at 10:18 AM Author
    yes, Phil. That's the view from the treatment room, which I want to emphasize...

    If I make the dental chair more visible, how do you think?

    thank you so much!
    H
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 6/23/2009 at 12:06 PM Accepted
    Don't focus on the equipment. Focus on faces from smiling customers. You want to focus on the benefit you offer (better looking teeth/healthier mouth) and less on the menu of services (tools/equipment).
  • Posted on 6/23/2009 at 3:22 PM Accepted
    I agree with Jay, don't focus on the equipment. To a patient, the drills and tools are scary and off-putting. What you want is happy faces or before and after pictures or something that conveys a benefit.

    Give Your Smile a Fighting Chance Against Cavities

    Go From Dull Teeth to a Brilliant Smile

  • Posted on 6/24/2009 at 10:59 PM Author
    hi all,
    thanks so much for your attention. well, my idea is to focus on the window view of the clinic, which is to bring the comfort and fearless feeling to the patients.

    I revised the artwork a bit.
    https://www.flickr.com/photos/11348309@N05/3658251771/

    would highly appreciate your thoughts of suitable tagline.

    My ideas:
    - Sky of wonders for your smile
    - Feel at ease at Leong Dental with our sky views
    - Smile at the sky
    - Sky of wonders awaits for you
    - Let your dentist fear become the past

    thanks a million, guys!
    H
  • Posted on 6/26/2009 at 3:39 AM Author
    how about this new tagline?
    Sky of wonders. Something you're to hold.

    https://www.flickr.com/photos/11348309@N05/3662313594/

    Do u think it match with the below cyan texts?

    really appreciate your critiques.

    tksss
    H
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