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Need Help Creating A Motto

Posted by Anonymous on 9/22/2010 at 9:49 PM ET 250 Points
My business name is Serenity Massage. The name stemmed from the Serenity Prayer because I live my day to day life by that prayer. Everything I do, I do with that in my head. That being said, I am trying to see if it is possible to incorparate the message behind the prayer into my motto and still make it sound relaxing and inviting. I want the message to be something to the effect of YOU CAN CHANGE YOUR STRESS LEVELS BY INDULGING IN SOME YOU TIME! But for some reason that sounds a little too long and conversational.
I would appreciate any input anyone can give!
Thank you in advance, Vanessa
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  • Posted by SteveByrneMarketing on 9/23/2010 at 2:01 AM Accepted
    maybe something like ...

    Serenity Massage
    Release Your Stress With Massage Therapy
  • Posted on 9/23/2010 at 10:38 AM Author
    Thanks Steve, but I'm looking for something without the phrase "massage therapy" in it lol
    Phil I appreciate your thought on it and I did take that into consideration as well.
    The religious core is for my soul. Anyone who would look at the name would probably just relate it to massage and what the word actually means. As far as the motto it's pretty much the same. Only the ones who share my beliefs would be able to put it together and link it to the prayer. I really did take careful consideration not to insult anyone's beliefs or lack there of. I doubt if someone just looked at the business name Serenity Massage that has a motto of "Change your stresses by indulging in luxury and Bliss" would get a religious message
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 9/24/2010 at 8:43 AM Accepted
    Relax and Feel At Peace
    Relaxation For Your Body & Mind
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