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Need Tagline Critique

Posted by Anonymous on 4/20/2011 at 2:21 PM ET 125 Points
Hello! I am entering a home improvement makeover contest and need to submit a Tagline that will be displayed with my photo thumbnail. Here is what I was thinking:

MAIN TAGLINE (23 characters MAX):
Seeking the WOW! Factor OR
Lacking the WOW! Factor

What do you guys think? Thanks in advance for your feedback and critiques.
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 4/20/2011 at 10:16 PM Accepted
    How about: "Go From Ow To Wow!" (if you're doing the makeover) or "Get Me Out Of Here!" (if you need one)
  • Posted on 4/22/2011 at 2:36 AM Accepted
    Or, working off 'HowToWriteBetter':

    Need some Wow - now!

    I used 'need' instead of 'want' because it's a contest and you might sound more like you NEED to win the makeover if you 'need' something rather than 'want' something?
  • Posted by sparnell on 4/26/2011 at 12:31 AM Accepted
    I prefer taglines that are a little more specific to your services. I'm assuming you provide home improvement services, so how about something that relates to the feeling the homeowner will have after you work on their home:

    From shack to chateau
    From shack to chalet
    Your dream home awaits


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