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Feedback On My Tagline For Busygenie Concierge Service

Posted by Anonymous on 1/13/2012 at 9:35 AM ET 250 Points
Hi All,

I would appreciate your help and feedback on a tagline for my personal concierge and errand business. The business name is BusyGenie. Here is what I've come up with so far:

Getting Busy? Get a Genie @ Your Service.
When life is too busy, get a Genie.
Getting Busy? BusyGenie Always @ Your Service.
Need Help Getting It All Done? Get a Genie @ Your Service.
BusyGenie Always @ Your Service

All feedback, suggestions and guidance greatly appreciated!

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  • Posted by CarolBlaha on 1/13/2012 at 9:55 AM Accepted
    I'm busy so you don't have to be.
    You're already busy, Get BusyGenie. Unbusy.
    You + BusyGenie = Relax....
    Relax, BusyGenie is here.
    BusyGenie will grant your Unbusy Wish
  • Posted on 1/13/2012 at 12:15 PM Member
    Busy Genie. We let you off the hook.


    Slow down with Genie in a throttle.
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 1/13/2012 at 9:40 PM Member
    All of your taglines don't really tell the reader what you do or for who. You know what a BusyGenie is, but no one else does. So, instead of trying to be cute, why not be clear? For example:Boise's Personal Errand Service
  • Posted by CarolBlaha on 1/14/2012 at 1:28 AM Member
    Have you seen those 3 word quotes, where they list 3 words like, breathe, relax, dream. or other words. I saw one in a store today and thought of you. Go to Hobby Lobby and you'll see what I mean.

    Anyways, something like this. https://phenomenalhealthstyle.tv/2011/01/04/breathing-exercise. I'd do instead of the captain wheel, your genie. And, say something like, Breathe, Relax, Busy Genie On. (or just Busy Genie but adding the "on" is stronger).

    I do a variation on my Etsy site, Dream, Create and Etsy on. https://www.etsy.com/listing/88790741/esty-on-embroidery?ga_search_query=et... its a very popular and recognized concept. Not copycat. My variation is not the traditional 3 words up and down.

    I also liked thishttps://www.etsy.com/listing/69864098/decorative-poster-just-breathe-burgundy. And put a genie in the blank space on the right instead of that purple block. I love how the pix shows the arm up. It screams "help" Don't you think?
  • Posted on 1/14/2012 at 8:00 AM Author
    Thanks all for your replies and guidance. Much appreciated! Carol, great ideas!
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