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Need A New Tagline For Women's Accessories Site

Posted by becca_l on 7/18/2012 at 11:52 AM ET 125 Points
Hello,

I'm having difficulties coming up with a new tagline. My site sells mostly headbands, but also other fashion accessories. www.stylishmode.com

My target market is all women aged 20 - 45. While I usually have more colorful, retro prints, I try not to reflect that in ads or taglines as it deters those looking for more basic accessories, which I also carry.

The tagline needs to refer to "women", or "adult" somehow. Otherwise, I get a lot of questions about headbands for kids.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 7/18/2012 at 7:14 PM Member
    Currently your tagline is "featuring fabulous HEADBANDS & other fashion accessories, for all ages!". Instead of "for all ages", why not say "featuring fabulous HEADBANDS & other women's fashion accessories!"
  • Posted by becca_l on 7/19/2012 at 11:10 AM Author
    Thank you both very much, we're definitely on the right track.

    Part of what bothers me about the current tagline is that there are too many words that start with the letter "f". I like the word "fabulous", but also wonder if that's dated, or if there's something better.

  • Posted by susanne on 7/19/2012 at 4:13 PM Accepted
    How about something like: Headbands and accessories for today's woman
  • Posted by becca_l on 7/19/2012 at 5:09 PM Author
    Susanne, it's absolutely perfect, thank you!
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