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Topic: Taglines/Names

Need A Slogan For A Nail Care Products Brand

Posted by Anonymous on 1250 Points
Hi all,

I am starting my own brand of nail care products for natural nails. Items such as base coat, top coat, polish remover, cuticle remover etc..

The company's goal is to offer educated advice on how to properly take care of your nails. The formulas will consist of only the best ingredients that have actually been proven to work, and not just being used as a marketing scheme.

I need a slogan that will be current, catchy and showcase the education and integrity of the brand.

THANK YOU!!!!!!
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  • Posted on Accepted
    "Catchy" won't "showcase the education and integrity of the brand." "Catchy" is just a distraction from the real reason your customers should care about your brand.

    So let's focus on that. First, who is your primary target audience for the slogan? Where do they live? What do they need and value most? What brands are they using now? Why should they switch to your brand?

    Next, what is the name of your brand? It's hard to come up with a great slogan without knowing the name of the product itself.

    Then let's understand what you're trying to communicate with the slogan. What big idea do you want to get across to the target audience? Where are they going to see this slogan? What action do you want them to take when they do see it?

    Give us some information, and we'll come up with some great slogan suggestions.

    BTW, if this is really as important for your business as I think it is, you probably ought to hire a professional to develop the slogan for you. We may come up with some good ideas here, but there's no way to be sure. There are people who do this for a living, and it's almost certainly going to be worth the fee you pay to get them involved.

    You can post a project on the Hire an Expert section of this website; see the column at the right side of this page. Or look through the profiles of top experts in this area and see if one of them sounds like they might be right for this project.
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Accepted
    First, what you're doing is to be APPLAUDED!

    Because it takes guts and courage to start a business in the beauty niche.

    Way to go!

    Second, several things trouble me about your question, not least of which is an apparent belief on your part that marketing is all about smoke and mirrors, as indicated (at least to me) in the phrase: "The formulas will consist of only the best ingredients that have actually been proven to work, and not just being used as a marketing scheme."

    The key alarm here is "... and not just being used as a marketing scheme."

    Marketing isn't just "a scheme."

    Then there's "catchy".

    It's not your fault. No one is blaming you. It's just that every week at least a dozen requests pop up on this forum for "catchy" names and tag lines. People are weary of it. I know I am. Michael Goodman too by the sounds of it. "Catchy" pops up like a weed that simply will not die.

    Catchy is not just a lie. Catchy is a God damn PLAGUE!

    Think about this for a moment: when was the last time you bought something ... ANYTHING .... based SOLEY on the "catchiness" of its name?

    FORGET price! ESCHEW benefits! SCREW availability, colors, and so on. Focus ONLY on the NAME. When did you last buy something based ONLY on its name?

    Alas ... the reality is that no one gives a crap about "catchy". When it comes to driving sales, when it comes to creating loyalty, "catchy" is a dead duck; an unwelcome guest at the supper table.

    Catchy serves little by way of function.

    "Catchy" is mostly a meaningless, bullshit, "catch-all" descriptor that leaks like a sieve. The myth that a name has to be in any way, shape, or form "catchy" to generate attention is just that: a myth.

    Catchy CAN be of use if it connects a primary benefit within the name to the desired outcome of the buyer. But mostly, "catchy" is just eye and ear candy.

    Similarly, the "current" nature of a tag line means little ... if anything.

    Current how? Related to what? The main thing that's current is news and news only remains current until the next big story.So you might want to rethink this.

    And then there's the desire to "showcase the education and integrity of the brand."

    Let's take a step back.

    Until you've solved several people's nail problems and done so consistently over time, you do not have a brand:you may have a product, you may have a business, you may have customers. But until lots of neural connections have been made and until you've commanded the scene of people's minds with specific language, you have not got a brand. Which means you've got little if any brand integrity.

    Before you can educate people you've got to get ... and then keep ... their attention. You must engage before you can educate and you can't engage until you've attracted attention.

    To do this requires generating interest and desire.

    How will you interest people? How will you create desire?

    Then, you've got to establish bonding and trust.

    How will you accomplish these two goals?

    I'm not trying to shoot your idea full of holes, I'm trying to help you see that a tag line alone is not enough. You need to find a niche (which you've done), but next, you need to COMMAND that niche: you've got to make it YOURS ... you've got to make nails your bitch.

    Only once you've done this can you set about educating people.

    Not before.

    What is it about your products that rocks?

    Why will people buy from YOU?

    What do YOU do that no one else does?

    What's your story?

    What's your ideal value point?

    Who is your ideal buyer and what does she want out of her use of your product?

    I say again: What you're doing is to be APPLAUDED! Because it takes guts and courage to start a business in the beauty niche.

    So please: tell us more, give some thought to the questions and opinions I've raised, and come back with more information.


  • Posted on Author
    I see Catchy triggered some nerves! Perhaps I shouldn't have used it. I guess to me "Just do it" is catchy, "Melts in your mouth, not in your hand". That's catchy to me.

    My target audience are women (age 18 and older - younger girls wont be able to afford the product) that care about their nails and want to know the proper way of taking care of them. They are thirsty for knowledge.

    Right now the two biggest brands that are out in the nail care industry are Essie and OPI, they were both recently bought out by large corporations and the quality of the product and the packaging has already gone down. An educated customer will realize it and will want to switch to something new that will yield the same results.

    I think since the point of the brand will be to educate and help the consumer the slogan should reflect that. The name of the brand is Maxus. I chose it because it sounds strong and Max is the name of my brother that passed away. In a way this is a way for his name to live on. The goal is for the slogan to be synonymous with Maxus.

    Thank you for the suggestion to use an expert. I will absolutely consider it and will probably end up hiring one unless we come up with something brilliant during this thread.

    Gary - thank you for the words of support.

    What I meant about the marketing scheme is that in 95% of nail strengtheners when you see ingredients being lauded on the front of the bottle such as tea tree oil or green tea, the formulas actually contain less than 1% of those aforementioned ingredients. They do absolutely nothing in those small concentrations for the nail - they are being put into the formula purely for the marketing.

    What I meant by current is today's popular culture, we are obsessed with social media, anything reality. I guess thats not really helpful, is it?

    What is it about your products that rocks? I consulted a top chemist in the industry to come up with formulas that actually work, which will keep the consumer coming back. Something to keep in mind - the brand will only gear towards the natural nail. Natural beauty should be something that more people embrace.

    Why will people buy from YOU? I am young, an immigrant and a female - lots of press could be written about all those factors. I will absolutely be marketing myself as much as the brand itself. I graduated with a BA degree and have just enrolled myself for nail technician classes in a very popular prestigious school. I will be taking the state exam in March. When I will be giving advice I will actually have the education to back myself up with.

    What do YOU do that no one else does? Listen to consumers. Since I am a small company and will always enforce an open door policy and customer service I will be able to react to suggestions/trends quicker. I come from the fashion industry so aesthetics is incredibly important for me in personal life and the brand - the overall look of the packaging will look more luxury and upscale but will have competitive pricing.

    What's your story? I guess I sort of answered that already.

    What's your ideal value point? Im not sure what you mean by value point. Is that the same as a price point?

    Who is your ideal buyer and what does she want out of her use of your product? The ideal buyer is a woman that wants to have beautiful natural nails. Its as simple as that.

    PS. "Make nails your bitch" literally made me laugh out loud. I wish I could use that as the slogan!!! Its perfect.
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Member
    Hi Dminina,

    GREAT, GREAT RESPONSE! One of the best I've read in over two years.

    "Maxus: Make Nails Your Bitch!" COULD work!

    Why the hell not?

    I'll get back to you with more response tomorrow. Hang in there.



  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Accepted
    Dminina - a tagline with attitude could work, but only if the audience you're targeting would understand it and have a positive reaction to it. Rather than throw taglines out there, can you tell us more about who you're targeting (age, demographic, region, fashion sense, etc.) and why they're likely to want to switch to your product (unless you're targeting youth, your audience is already likely to have a favorite brand)? Also - if your product has better ingredients (and you want to compete based on quality), how do you stack up against organic nail polishes (Karma, Suncoat, etc.)? Finally, realize that no one really cares about your background - they care about the product you're selling. Is it provably longer-lasting, less-toxic, more color-fast, quicker to dry, etc.? Imagine seeing a wall of nail polish in a local beauty supply store - why would someone pick up YOUR product instead of the myriad of others?
  • Posted on Author
    Jay,

    I dont know if I fully agree about people not caring about my background. https://lippmanncollection.com/07bio.php This brand is marketed solely on the fact that this woman is a famous manicurist. Unless she will personally do my nails, I dont see how that would be a benefit to me.

    I have done questionnaires and asked how loyal women are when it comes to their nail products, while most of them said they are very loyal, more than 90% said that if a product will be recommended by a friend they will try it. Which is why having great formulas, and not being cheap on the ingredients come into play.

    A customer will pick up my product because the graphics on the packaging will stand out against the competition. They will continue buying the product because yes, the base coat will fill ridges, prevent staining and allow for better adhesion of the polish. The top coat will not dry fast ( quick drying top coat are actually not good because they evaporate quicker and leave the polish more prone to scratching) instead I have quick dry drops that will dry the polish in less than 5 min.
  • Posted by Ghost Writer on Accepted
    Since the brand identity of your product is that it REALLY works to strengthen your nails, how about a name that emphasizes strength and durability:

    Granite
    'World's Toughest Nails'

    Diamonds Are For Nails
    'Stronger Nails. Really.'

    E-Nail
    'Stronger Nails Through Technology"
  • Posted on Author
    ohhh. I like "Stronger Nails. Really"
  • Posted on Author
    Phil,

    Thank you for your suggestions and your kind words.

    I have already incorporated my company as well as trademarked the brand name. I dont have any liability insurance yet only because I dont have any product as of yet. Believe you me I will be getting it as soon as needed!

    I wish I could use the term - Naturally. But unfortunately that would be a big fat lie. The fingernails that I am treating are natural but thats about it.
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Member
    Some good stuff rolling in here. THIS is more LIKE IT!

    Phil's right ... the background work you've done sets you
    apart and you'd be stunned at how snippy certain people can be and have been when they're questioned about business planning ... so much so that I'm seriously thinking of ending my contribution to this forum: I've been on the wrong end of three not happy people over the last two weeks and I'm sick of being treated like a frigging dogs body.

    Were people charged a fee to ask their questions I suspect their snippy responses would stop ... but perhaps not.

    OK. I think your story is important. It's a solid flag for customers to rally around (and here, my deepest and heartfelt condolences on the loss of your brother) and it's evident you've done niche research and that you know and care about your buyers. This is crucial.

    I think the name Maxus is short, memorable, powerful,
    and laced with direction. Again, good stuff.

    As for your tag line, I'm glad "Make Nails Your Bitch"
    made you laugh.

    Might it have a similar effect on your idea buyers?

    I don't know but what I do know is that a similar approach
    has worked and has created a cult following, as you'll see in this video for the Dollar SHave Club (6.3 million views in five months ... not too shabby):

    https://www.youtube.com/user/DollarShaveClub?v=ZUG9qYTJMsI

  • Posted on Author
    Gary, that video is HILARIOUS!!! Their motto goes with the commercial - which targets men. They are the ones that usually like the raunchy more vulgar humor. A lot of women would be offended by the word "bitch", especially the conservative ones. So even though I personally like it and think its.. wait for it... CATCHY ( sorry had to throw that in there haha) I think most women wont get it.

    I personally don't get offended by anything which is why I did not get offended by anything that written to me by you or anyone else. If anything all those questions made me be more confident in my brand and in what I am doing. And for that Im thankful.

    Please dont stop doing what you are doing, there are always bad apples in the bunch. But I truly appreciate everyone taking the time out to help me, and if you would stop people like me would lose out on your advice.

    I have been toying around with something along the lines of :

    Professional formulas for the public?
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Member
    OK. DollarShave probably wasn't the best example. It's still funny though!

    Let's move on, shall we?

    "Professional formulas for the public" is ... a little blah!

    "The public" don't buy nail solutions.

    Confident women do.

    So, how about something along the lines of:

    "Maxus: Perfect Nails for The Confident Woman"

    "Maxus: Stronger Nails For the Stronger Woman"

    Do you see what I'm getting at? The slogan needs to empower your buyer. She needs to see herself being "the thing" or having "the trait" or the quality that's embodied and personified through her use of the product.

    Your buyer must identify with her ownership of the result, with the feeling she gets of having ... made her nails her bitch (even though this phrase probably isn't right for your ideal buyer and brand advocate.)

    It's THIS feeling that builds powerful and commanding brands. And yes, it's those feelings that make the name, dare I say it, "catchy" (meaning, MEMORABLE).

    It's LESS (much less!) about being "catchy" and far, far more about anchoring specific neural keys about life as it will be on the other side of the purchase.

    Mitt Romney tried to do a lot of this last night ... but sadly (for him at least) the warm up act was Clint Eastwood ... so a lot
    of the anchoring that had already happened earlier in the evening went down the crapper! But that's politics.



  • Posted on Author
    Ghost Writer - the brand identity is that it offers education on how to take care of your nails in every day life. The fact that the product actually works is an added bonus. I really like your idea of the "stronger nails, Really" but not all products "strengthen" the nail - just one ( or a couple in the future). Majority of the products will help with the basic manicure procedures.

    Gary - I understand what you mean by empower. I like it. Since Im pushing education as what will set me apart,

    Phil - exquisite is something that you typically associate with something delicate. That is not what we want our nails to be.


    I was considering something like "Brainy Nail", "Nail Wisdom". Any thoughts/ideas/suggestions ?
  • Posted by Ghost Writer on Member
    You could always go with

    "Better Nails. Really."

    but on the nail/brain connection, I'm not sure how believable that would be for consumers. Smarter Nails doesn't make much sense to me.

    Being smart ABOUT your nails could work ...

    "The Smart Choice for Better Nails"

    hopes that helps

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