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Topic: Taglines/Names

Prettimommiz-"you Deserve To Be Pregnant &pretty

Posted by goshopshadeke on 25 Points
I am starting an online maternity store that is geared towards letting pregnant women feeling beautiful by providing outfits that caters to their new look
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Member
    Just to clarify, your new online store is "Prettimommiz" and you're looking for a tagline. What's wrong with your own idea, "You Deserve To Be Pregnant & Pretty?" What do you want your tagline to convey? How is what you're selling much better than what's already offered online?
  • Posted by goshopshadeke on Author
    I like my own idea. The idea is not an innovative one on an international basis but i have identify the niche in my own country. I have not seen a single online maternity store in JA. I just wanted to know if both the name and tagline are ok. I want pregnant women to feel beautiful despite how they feel. Being pregnant I wanted to look my best and i did too an too and I just want others to feel the same.
  • Posted by Mike Steffes on Member
    Yours is okay, here is another one:

    Prettimommiz
    Pregnant & Pretty Fashions
  • Posted by chiron34 on Member
    Prettimommiz
    ... When your're facing Motherhood, Prettimommiz will keep you looking pretty and stylish.
  • Posted by leenisme on Member
    Prettipreggers - Strut your baby bump
  • Posted by Chris Blackman on Member
    I see a major problem with "you deserve to be pregnant..." It sounds almost like a value judgement, the sort of thing unmarried mothers were told in the 1960s.

    I'd prefer to see a focus on the pretty side, and also on comfort - because pregnant women can often feel quite uncomfortable, not just in their clothes, but with bloating, morning sickness, and so on.

    You deserve to be comfortable - sounds a whole lot less complicated than you deserve to be pregnant, doesn't it?

    Who's your target market? And in which country are you based?

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