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Topic: Taglines/Names

Dental Office Needs Help With Tagline

Posted by Anonymous on 7/21/2005 at 12:44 PM ET 250 Points
We would like to have something go with:

"...a lifetime of healthy smiles"
Our problem is finding something that doesn't sound cheesy or like a guarantee. Any help will be appreciated! Thanks in advance!

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  • Posted on 7/21/2005 at 1:15 PM Accepted
    Could you provide a little more about your business model? Who are your primary customers (children, adults, family)? Do you have a specialty like orthodontics? What is your city and state (could affect the tone)?
    Thanks, Debi
  • Posted by adammjw on 7/21/2005 at 1:30 PM Accepted
    Steve,
    Of course Debbie is right with pointing out to specifics, but whatever they might be anyway your patients will need trust,patience and a bit of courage so perhaps:
    "Place some trust in our hands -it's worth a lifetime of healthy smiles"

    Regards

    Adam





  • Posted on 7/21/2005 at 1:32 PM Accepted
    I agree with D4... "a lifetime of happy smiles" is a good way to go.

    Perhaps for the "missing part" you can reference your services (when I go to the dentist, I want it to be as pleasant as possible)...

    Some examples:

    Personal care for a lifetime of happy smiles.
    Quality care for a lifetime of happy smiles.

    Good luck and let us know what you decide.
  • Posted by michael on 7/21/2005 at 2:09 PM Accepted
    You could also go with "a long line of healthy smiles" to highlight your length of time in the neighborhood.

    Or corny like: "Smiles check in, but bigger smiles check out"

    Michael
  • Posted on 7/21/2005 at 3:15 PM Member
    Your happy smile is our pleasure!

    Folks are happy with Hartline Dentistry,
    where your smile's our best reward!

    We take pride in your happy smile!

    Let Hartline Dentistry create the smile of your dreams!

    Creating happy smiles for over 25 years!
  • Posted by Chris Blackman on 7/21/2005 at 6:37 PM Accepted
    Miles and miles of perfect smiles!
  • Posted on 7/21/2005 at 6:43 PM Accepted
    If you don't have the perfect tagline, I'd suggest doing without it rather than picking a sub-optimal one.

    My vote right now would be for ChrisB's suggestion, but it's also been my experience that the best ideas show up a day or two after the deadline. These things need some soak time.

    WHY do you need a tagline? And why do you need it so quickly? What would happen if you waited another week or two?
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