Know-How Exchange : Website Critique

Just looking quickly:

https://www.positiveresults.com/nbd/

Space too big between top nav and main body (lots of blank blue space)

Bullet (2) delete the word "And"

Make your funnel jpg a little bigger

As a sales letter it isn't particularly strong - doesn't seem to talk to me, you need to start with a power headline like "Generate New Business with Ease" or something similar.

"However, in our experience with hundreds of successful organizations, nearly all of them are not achieving up to their potential" ... I would love to see a stat associated with this "95% of businesses are not achieving their full potential ... by reading this you could be in the top 5%" ... you see what I mean?

Need a stronger call to action, the bottom section just seems to be bit weak .. .you need something like "To book your exclusive appointment now" ... "Click here to take advantage of this offer" etc

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I hope that this helps.

Good Luck

Your overall website it ok.

Yet, what is your bounce rate?

Read the article about bounce rates within marketingprofs.com

You may also want to check out the following location:
https://checkwebsite.erigami.com/accessibility.html

Not sure if you're looking to make your site accessible for all, but this is also a great tool for broken links.

Fix your titles. Did you write down your standards for sizing, font, etc.? Creating a style guide and standards is smart when you're looking to make your site consistent. Also, a suggestion to standardized your fonts... I see about 3. Sizes all vary.

Finally, my guess is your header has a jpeg, which doesn't allow you to format your page. Look at various other headers. Using the Internet allows you research other sites to maxmize the real estate of your own site. There's little space between the main content and headers, yours detracts from your site.

Also, look at apple.com, adobe.com, etc. These sites follow the main standards used by internet users. You may wish to think about sizing, background color, etc.

Just my two cents...

S