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Topic: Website Critique

Is It Inspiring?

Posted by Anonymous on 1/6/2009 at 6:49 AM ET 45 Points
All constructive comments welcome! www.inspiringfitness.co.uk and the sister site www.inspiringfitnesspartners.co.uk

Does it get the message across instantly in what we do and what we offer? Is the call-to-action clear and simple to see and want to do?

Thanks in advance.
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  • Posted on 1/6/2009 at 9:31 AM Accepted
    Hi, Paul

    Your website definitely gets the message across.

    You might consider replacement of some of your
    "call-to-action" items/information such as "Remember – a 55 minute session with your personal trainer can burn up to 50% more calories than the same time in the gym." may better serve you placed toward the top of the page or within your flashing benefits banner.

    Consider moving your tagline "Personal Training for Life" up near your logo.

    This sentence is somewhat ambiguous..."We’re specialist personal trainers, dedicated to personally supporting our clients – people like you – meet their fitness goals.

    Might consider changing the last part of your sentence to read "in meeting their fitness goals."

    "Find a Trainer" and "See Exactly What We Do" could be reduced in their size and moved up toward the top of the page.

    I'd consider reworking graphics to get away from a rectangular/boxy look.

    However, if you did not change anyting about your site, I do believe that it is inspiring and instantly communicates what you do and what you offer.

    Marketing-Riot


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