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Topic: Website Critique

Help With Content On Website

Posted by Anonymous on 3/5/2009 at 6:30 AM ET 40 Points
My company has a website of which i'm in charge of content. I have 3 questions. 1. As a visitor to the site, does it answer any questions you may have about the company? 2. Does it have enough information for you the visitor? 3. Is it easy to use? The address is www.aviationsocialcentre.com.gh
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  • Posted on 3/5/2009 at 8:48 AM Member
    It's confusing. You're doing too many things. Is it a social center? A bar? A banquet hall? A fitness center?

    The splash page suggests a bar, but then I get to the home page and I see exercise, dating, and dinner.

    Pick one!
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 3/5/2009 at 9:47 AM Member
    What's immediately missing is your location.
    Secondly, since you have a physical building - show pictures of the inside/outside to give me a peek at what it looks like (and the types of people who go there).
    Lastly, focus on what you're trying to accomplish on the home page.
  • Posted on 3/5/2009 at 10:15 AM Author
    I appreciate your feedback. Any suggestions on the site reconstruction is welcome. To jkaplan: that is my exact problem, we do too many things and i have to project it all so i can't pick one.
  • Posted on 3/6/2009 at 9:31 AM Accepted
    Well, which one brings the most revenue? Or is the most appealing to your target customer?

    Focus on that, and sideline the others. Otherwise, it's too confusing!

    Oh, and delete the splash page, it slows people down.


    Jodi
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