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My Website Critique

Posted by Anonymous on 5/19/2009 at 9:24 PM ET 250 Points
I launch a website for business owners but I don't know why I'm not getting traffic . Any thoughts? The website is https://allbusinessprospects.com
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 5/20/2009 at 9:17 AM Member
    (Aside: It doesn't appear you have analytics installed. I recommend at least starting with Google Analytics to give you some accurate traffic data.)

    Website Grader gives your website a score of 65 / 100 (https://website.grader.com/wsgid/3037901/default.aspx). There's a fair bit of SEO improvements to be had.

    There's a bit of bad grammar on the site, for example: "Join NOW ....IS FREE" and "We provide this tools to help you improve..."

    Finally (and most importantly), it's not clear what your website offers the visitor or why I should trust your various services.
  • Posted on 5/20/2009 at 12:29 PM Author
    thank you for your feedback... I will start making the updates ASP
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on 5/22/2009 at 6:50 PM Accepted
    Dear Office,

    Your home page images are in little folders and the text on the tabs takes ages to load.

    But, I have no true clue what you're offering. As per Jay's comments above, there's little explanation of what it is you offer and why I should give yo the time of day.

    There's also a huge myth that people want to see pictures on a website. Wrong. As your potential client, I want to read about your services. Your images give me no instruction to click on them, and you don't give me the impression that I could click on the images, even if I wanted to.

    I hope this helps you.

    Gary Bloomer
    Wilmington, DE, USA
  • Posted on 5/29/2009 at 4:55 PM Accepted
    Well, it's really hard to read the white type on the black background. The pages somehow seem to have a strong glare at the top, which makes the problem even worse. I clicked on one of the images on the home page, and the page that came up was blurry. As Gary said, I've no idea what you're offering or why I should be interested.

    And, definitely invest the time (and money) in a good copywriter (or at least a copy editor); the site is riddled with grammatical errors.
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