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Topic: Website Critique

Blog Critique

Posted by Anonymous on 8/20/2009 at 11:36 AM ET 20 Points
What advice do you have to make this better?
What is your first impression?

Any thoughts would be helpful.

https://fitoverforty.info
dis regard the URL above has nothing
to do with the blog just a forwarding domain.

Thank you!
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  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on 8/27/2009 at 1:11 PM Accepted
    Dear Grabfish1,

    I'd ditch the gun image. And I'd change the main outside colour from black to something a little brighter.

    I'd also replace the "SECRETS HOW TO MAKE MONEY ONLINE A-Z" ad with a name and e-mail capture box, in exchange for an offer of some sort.

    This way, you can build a list of people interested in a certain niche to whom you can market other goods and services.

    I hope this helps.

    Gary Bloomer
    Wilmington, DE, USA
  • Posted on 8/27/2009 at 7:08 PM Author
    Yes it dose, thanks this is good stuff!
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