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Topic: Website Critique

Are We Connecting Now?

Posted by Anonymous on 11/16/2009 at 4:05 PM ET 250 Points
Ladies and gents,

I was told that www.knowledgenotebook.com website is not stylish enough for one thing. In a nut shell, not good enough.

Here's an attempt (a template) to make it connect with college students, my primary target market for Knowledge NoteBook, a note-taking tool.
https://www.knowledgenotebook.com/kn-website2.jpg

Let's put ourselves in their shoes to take a look at it.
And then kindly share your thoughts.

Many thanks as usual.

Don
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  • Posted by Chris Blackman on 11/16/2009 at 5:00 PM Accepted
    Donli

    The new template certainly looks a lot better. Much more classy and I think the black background will gel well with your student target market.

    The $500 contest is a bit naff. Instead, I'd suggest you use a headline like "Win $500 - Free entry here".

    Hope that helps.

    ChrisB
  • Posted on 11/16/2009 at 10:55 PM Author
    An additional thought. A few cute girls have sent me some email with pics. What if we add a link with a title like "Cute girls loving Knowledge NoteBook" something and bring up their pic and their talk or whatever about i?

    A plus or gimmick?

    Thanks as always.
  • Posted on 11/16/2009 at 11:09 PM Author
    On a second thought, what if we add a button called
    KN Girls on the top?
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