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Topic: Website Critique

Website Critique

Posted by Anonymous on 25 Points
Hi there, this site has been very helpful and I recently made changes to my website www.retro-jet.com after various points of critique from users of this site. The home page has been changed to look a little more pleasing and user friendly. Sales have jumped from 3 to around 15 per month. Although this has been a vast improvement I feel that it could be a little better.Once again would like your points incase I've missed something critical. The changes I've made are: new hompage, added price info in 3 other currencies, will be adding a 'tell a friend' function, and a competion page.
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Accepted
    (Aside: The "Additional Information" area doesn't display correctly in my Firefox browser. It shows only 5 lines of text - is that intentional?).

    Why not make your call to action: Buy Your Own Vintage Airline Flight Bag"? "..Now Landed" doesn't say much. Also - why not show the prices of the sample bags (and allow to click to order) on the home page? One fewer steps for the visitor to perform.

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