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Topic: Website Critique

Second Attempt

Posted by c_gabriel99 on 9/22/2010 at 7:35 PM ET 125 Points
Would like any and all critiques of second attempt at website. I tried to decrease the copy on the first page.

It's not complete at this moment(thus the order page), but almost there.

www.mygiftassistant.com
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  • Posted by c_gabriel99 on 9/25/2010 at 11:39 AM Author
    Thanks Karen and Joannah.

    I think I have moved in the right direction from the original site, but you're advice has definitely given me the ideas to move into the luxury market. I thank you.

    Joannah: That website screams luxury with just a whisper. Thanks a lot.

    Back to the drawing board.
  • Posted by susancarrollcreative on 9/29/2010 at 1:22 PM Accepted
    You need a photo or photos that capture the desire fun and thoughtfulness of giving gifts.
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