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Topic: Website Critique

A Designer''s Site

Posted by Anonymous on 1/6/2011 at 6:43 PM ET 250 Points
Hi,
I'm a print, web and apparel designer. I've recently redesigned and updated my portfolio.

I really value the opinions of those on this forum. What do you think of my portfolio?

Thank you!
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 1/6/2011 at 6:49 PM Member
    Where can we see the portfolio, Daniel?
  • Posted on 1/6/2011 at 6:53 PM Author
    https://www.whoisdanielmoore.com

    thank you!
  • Posted by johnwhitepaper on 1/6/2011 at 7:33 PM Accepted
    Daniel:

    I like what you're doing on your blog, except for the Jan 6 posting. It shows design intelligence and up-to-date-ness.

    I don't get the VG in your favicon. Can you make it match your logo?

    Remove "Currently: accepting new clients" Everybody knows that. Also change "where" to "were" on the Web Design description.

    Suggest you figure out how to get all your talents above the fold. On my laptop, I have to scroll down to see Apparel Design and Print Design. Can you put just Branding, Graphics and Design across the main page, with a Design subpage that shows Web, Print, Apparel and Logo?

    I see a few typo's. Have somebody proofread all of your pages.

    Hard to say why, but much of your copy is whispering in my ear, "I'm new to this." Visitors don't want to get that impression; they want to get "My clients rely on me to..." Your designs and presentation are fine, but your copy isn't as confident as it should be.

    Hope this helps.
  • Posted on 1/6/2011 at 7:38 PM Author
    Thank you so much. I will make these edits!
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