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About Advertising Slogan For Fb

Posted by Anonymous on 5/19/2011 at 11:38 AM ET 50 Points
we are a 14 roomed boutique hotel and on our facebook page if I put in about section 'said good things count on the fingers of two hands but we have more' ''14 unique rooms'', is that gramatically true? also how does that sound? any comment would be highly appreciated thanks
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  • Posted on 5/19/2011 at 4:14 PM Accepted
    I don't understand the "good things count on the fingers of two hands" thing. It might be a colloquialism that doesn't translate well.
  • Posted by michael on 5/19/2011 at 8:02 PM Accepted
    Grammar is not always related to effectiveness. Same is true of spelling.

    Michael
  • Posted by Sally on 5/19/2011 at 8:57 PM Accepted
    Do you have a slogan that you have used elsewhere? To me, 14 rooms and boutique means personal and attentive service. Is that what you provide?
  • Posted by CarolBlaha on 5/19/2011 at 10:28 PM Accepted
    I'm with Goodman-- who said "good things happen..." That is where the problem is
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