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Topic: Website Critique

Please Critique This Website

Posted by Anonymous on 125 Points
Hi there, please could you critique this website
www.foehn.co.uk
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  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Accepted
    The sites looks great but the text is too heavy on the MBA-speak. You also talk about yourselves a little bit more than you talk about your customers.

    Cut the jargon. Figure out what people want. then offer it to them in plain English, then tell them what to do next.

  • Posted on Author
    Thanks for your feedback Gary, much appreciated.
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Accepted
    Make your contact information easier to find (in footer/banner/title).

    I like that you attempt to segment your visitors on your home page, but finding this information is a bit hard with too many competing menus/graphics.

    Your rotating slider is distracting, too large, and untargeted.
  • Posted by andrew.coffman on Accepted
    I like the overall look - its a very appealing design. The foldout graphic area is cool but gets in the way a bit when navigating your site. I like sliders but this one is too big.

    Get rid of the Ours at the top and just list Products, Services, Clients etc

    I want to see the how you can help up in the slider. Show how you can solve their problems ASAP. Also shorten this section - too much text.

    The Press Release below how we can help is not necessary since you have Who's Talking About Us below. Get rid of this as its distracting.

    I'd recommend moving the tweets up under Call Us. Shows you are a hip and socially aware company and provides value to potential customers. However, tweets need to be relevant and helpful content.

    Your Product/Services Pages look good. Standard look/feel and having contact info below is good idea.

    Hope you find this information helpful and good luck.



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