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Topic: Website Critique

My First Website, Need Help

Posted by Anonymous on 7/20/2012 at 7:05 PM ET 250 Points
Hello, Good Day!, It's my first time to create a website, and i need your comments first if it ok or not, before i change the domain name. Thank you. This is my website
www.infoguidetraining.wix.com\revised
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 7/20/2012 at 7:17 PM Accepted
    A few points off-the-top:

    - Your URL is: www.infoguidetraining.wix.com/revised (with a forward slash)
    - Unless your business is owned by WIX, having your site hosted by them for free in exchange for their name on your site looks badly (and even covers up some of your wording).
    - It's not clear who specifically you're trying to attract, why they need you, and why they should trust you to solve their problems.
    - Since you're located in the Phillippines, make that very clear on your home page - your phone number, your address, etc. - should all be region/country-specific.
  • Posted by SteveByrneMarketing on 7/20/2012 at 7:39 PM Accepted
    Agreement with Jay.

    My first impression was you provide "training" then I asked myself, what kind of training? For who? where?

    So I went to View> View Source> Title tag -
    <title>Infoguide Knowledge and Training Center Inc. | Wix.com</title>

    No help with any relevant keywords in your home page title tag (note: your title tag is the most important place for those all important "keyword phrases" that people will enter in a search to find you)

    And as Jay observed, make your location clear, not everyone will know that Pasig City is in the Philippines.

    Hope this helps,

    Steve
  • Posted on 7/20/2012 at 8:03 PM Author
    Hi, Thank you Sir Steve, Thank you Sir Jay.

    About my URL, Yes, sir, i just use this as a draft site, since it is the revised site, and i am going to transfer it to my existing site that is soooooo bad :( , this will be changed to infoguidetraining.net, without wix already.

    I need to study on the title, as what sir steve had said. And ill be more specific on my location. Thank you very much
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