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Event Wording For Networking Event

Posted by mary.mcfarlin on 3/28/2015 at 1:02 PM ET 1040 Points
Here is a link to my event

https://www.eventbrite.com/e/linked-n-chicago-live-event-at-trophy-april-7th-tickets-16003244134

I hold these monthly. I need to add some flare or at least a better description. I've been running these events monthly for years and I feel like my idea bank dried up. Would love some critique!
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 3/28/2015 at 3:19 PM Accepted
    What specific part of the description do you want to focus on ("Grow your Network...see for yourself!")?
    Do you have some testimonials from previous attendees? If so, consider including these.
    Do you have stories of great things (business started/sold) that happened at past events, consider including one (or more).
    Since this is a networking event, also highlight those in attendance - rather than your organization.
  • Posted on 3/29/2015 at 6:08 PM Moderator
    1. What is the objective? Why do you need to change anything? What's driving your craving for creativity?

    2. Why is your website so short on images of humans enjoying the meet-ups? Isn't that what you're selling?

    3. You probably should consider sharing some success stories from people who have connected through your networking meetings.
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