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Is This A Good Lead Capture Page?

Posted by Anonymous on 6/26/2005 at 9:45 AM ET 250 Points
Is this a good Lead capture page to enroll members to my MakeMoneyOnlineClub
link to review is
https://join.michaelnicolson.com
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  • Posted by Deremiah *CPE on 6/26/2005 at 5:53 PM Member
    Rockyboy2,

    I think it should be reworked to make it stronger. Overall I think it could be shorter. However the long copy could work if you are going to make it more clear, with shorter sentences and precise. Is there anything else I can do for you?

    Your Servant, Deremiah, *CPE (Customer Passion Evangelist)
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