Know-How Exchange : Website Critique

I am open to making changes should there be a lacuna in the sales page or the entire campaign alltogether.

Thanks everyone,
I am defintely facing problems in creation of phrasing of contents.
The idea of keeping the big promise hidden is to generate curiosity among the visitors, so they would want to buy th best.
It's not important to make it the ultimate best as the time I have is short and my patience seems to give up now as I just want to see her. I just want a moderate sales, if there is mystery and curiosity in the contents, it will only add to the story.
last, I am adding the goal as to ' know the promise, right from the start', buy your copy now.
should make the site complete.
gandhak

Thanks Sanjay,
Can you tell me where I go for content writing?
The index is there to explain the contents of the book.

The space ihas deliberately been left blank for the reason that it relatds to Love.

All right skoobie,
thanks for the comments. The audience is women worlwide, the USP is that it's a live story and the contents have deliberately been designed confusing and mysterious. Women are more receptive to such stories.
Yes, it's one way too much but that's because because the book talks only about my life and the contents present only my story, thus the solo kind of show.
call to acion will further make it complete, which I shall do tonight. All that needs to be added is that the book is selling here and the sales will lay the foundation for the promise to come true.
I guess the visitors haven't really surfed the site to the full, hat's what i xpect from my visiotors after all the curiosity I start in the home page.
Last but not the least, I wish I really had her picture, the life would have been much simpler and the pain; much smaller. Anyway, this is where I stand, trying to raise enough money through my book,. to keep my promise.

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