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Web Page Critique

Posted by Anonymous on 7/8/2004 at 11:10 AM ET 125 Points
I would like a critique of our web page from KHE:

I did not design the site, it existed when I got here....

I added the testimonials on the page, that is the main contribution that I have gotten to make.....

We are a medium sized bank in a medium sized community about 30 miles southwest of Ft. Worth, TX...

We are a bedroom community with about 7,000 in the city limits and about 30,000 who live around the city, which is the county seat.....

I am curious to know what you think about it, what you like and don't like...

www.fnbgranbury.com

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  • Posted by SRyan ;] on 7/8/2004 at 12:55 PM Accepted
    Kevin, I'm only looking at the home page (too much on my plate today), and my first reaction was that the text down the middle seemed excessive. Could a chunk of it, like the disclaimer, be moved to the right margin underneath the Online menu? Put it in a smaller font if that's not breaking any accessibility regulations.

    Other text formatting notes:

    » Centering the text looks weird.
    » Exclamation points in the testimonials make the quotes sound less sincere.
    » The content under "Banking with FN" could be tightened up a bit so that you don't have lonely orphan words dangling below two of the paragraphs

    I'm guessing it will take some time and persuasion to get FNB to put the smart changes in place that Jim describes, only because organizations often move slowly! I hope my thoughts are useful purely as short-term cosmetic changes to the home page.

    Have a great day!

    - Shelley
  • Posted by Blaine Wilkerson on 7/10/2004 at 5:20 PM Member
    Kevin,

    You are the fastest closer this here side of the Mississip!!

    Do you still want more opinions are are you full?

    --Blaine
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