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Topic: Copywriting
Help Re-construct A Short Sentence
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I need help constructing a sentence.
I'm starting a free magazine service in my town and I need to get approval for the distribution. I'm having some problem constructing the following sentence:
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"In the effort of promoting community messages, We will reserves 1 page of each magazine free of charge to various community(health department, youth organization etc.) in promoting their campaign such as anti smoking, anti drug, safe sex campaign etc."
"Any sponsors that is associated with alcohol, tobacco, credit cards etc. is strictly prohibited. "
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It sounds amateurish, perhaps you can help me construct a better sentence. I'm very open with suggestions, feel free to add in name of organizations etc.
Thanks for reading!