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Sms To Promote Balance Transfer

Posted by mothicy on 5/23/2010 at 11:08 AM ET 125 Points
Hi,

Trying to come up with a text (sms) message for credit card customers to promote balance transfer through sms. some ideas are as follows, but I need something that is catchy and easy msg to go across to customers.

- best balance transfer interest rate in town! sms for more info
- best rate in town!
- for real, we offer the best rate in town!
- win an iPhone when you do balance transfer with us

thanks in advance for the suggestions!
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  • Posted on 5/23/2010 at 11:53 AM Accepted
    Hi - here are some:

    Clear that debt: lowest rate balance transfer
    Balance transfer now: Just XX%
    Transfer that debt to us: low XX% rate

    Hope that helps,

    Peter
  • Posted by mothicy on 6/2/2010 at 7:49 AM Author
    Hi Karen,

    Will you be able to email to me the PDF file? I can't seem to access it from here.

    I will send you my email address.

    Thanks!
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