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Topic: Copywriting

Sms In Promoting Retail Store

Posted by hotaxian19 on 12/6/2010 at 3:52 AM ET 250 Points
I need a short, simple yet catchy SMS or text message I can send to my customers mobile that i have a new stocks of Branded bags.. you can look at my website to learn about my company profile-
uberfinds.multiply.com
The objective is for them to visit my store or facebook account
Example:
UBERFINDS WILD HOLIDAY TREAT!
NEW STOCKS OF YOUR FAVE BRANDED BAGS- JUST ARRIVED!
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  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on 12/6/2010 at 10:27 AM Accepted
    Dear hotaxian19,

    Catchy is Not a Selling Strategy™

    Forget "catchy". Focus on significance for your
    potential customer. Focus on the solutions you offer
    to the problems they have.

    I hope this helps.

    Gary Bloomer
    The Direct Response Marketing Guy™
    Wilmington, DE, USA

  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on 12/6/2010 at 2:31 PM Accepted
    We Have UberGreat Gifts
    Just In - New Branded Bags.
  • Posted by hotaxian19 on 12/6/2010 at 9:56 PM Author
    I need examples of SHORT MESSAGES..SOMETHING THAT WILL HAVE AN IMPACT AND WILL TAKE THEM INTO ACTION WHEN THEY READ THE MESSAGE
  • Posted on 12/10/2010 at 9:46 PM Accepted
    Just Arrived - Authentic Branded Bags at low low prices! Just in time for holiday cheer. Visit us at uberfinds.multiply.com.
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