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Topic: Copywriting

Writing Copy Without A Graphic Or Graphic Layout

Posted by mlang on 125 Points
I will be conducting a copywriting workshop for our product managers next Monday and as preparation, I asked them to send me what they struggle with most when writing copy.

Half of my class stated they have trouble getting started writing copy without a layout or graphic design to guide them/inspire them. My design team on the other hand tells me the copy dictates their layout and design.

We are a small company and our marketing peices are mostly product brochures, sell sheets, and direct mail postcards

Frankly, I'm stumped on how to address this. Personally I can visualize my finished piece and solicit feedback from my designers before writing copy.

My design team hates doing mock-ups because they end up having multiple revisions leading to several redesigns of entire layouts each time copy is changed.


Can anyone help? Is it usual to have the design/layout first for your copywriters?

See below if you need more info about what the presentation covers so far:

audience definition, speaking to the "You", objective of the piece, benefit selling, formatting for empahsis, keeping it short, use of voice, editing and revision, clear call to action, etc.

Our biggest challenges are: being to "we-centric" in our copy, kichen sinking" everything into one marketing piece," use of passive voice, too much copy for scannabilit, multiple calls to action, feature selling rather than benefit selling.



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  • Posted by totem on Accepted
    Hi Mary! This is a common problem. I am in marketing and sales. I make printed brochures and web sites for my own products/services as well as others so this is a familiar conundrum.

    In my experience, people get so hung up on what the thing will look like that it overshadows their focus on the content. I take a goal-oriented approach the creation of brochures and web sites so my rule is that *form follows function*. Good pieces should be as visual as possible, but even visuals as well as words represent the content of the message. So, both the words and the visuals require the same primary messaging development process.

    When creating for myself or supporting others, I start with the *function and goals* for the piece. Successful objectives will make a successful brochure. Ill-defined objectives (or not defined at all) will lead to the waste of time, money and effort so time spent on this first step is an investment in the success of the piece.

    Then conduct primary development of the content, *writing copy* in a plain-text editor (which puts more focus on the words themselves.) The copy should be worked over at least several times in a distillation process to help the copy gain efficiency by saying more with less. (Probably what separates professional copywriters from novices is measured in the dedication to refining copy. The best salespeople also practice this verbally.)

    I suggest that you develop a rule-of-thumb for your company materials for the number of words to target by examining previously successful examples. Most people over-estimate the amount of copy they can fit onto a brochure. Set the word count lower to force people to say more with less. As an exercise in the training, you might separate content from form with a few successful pieces to show the realistic amount of copy involved.

    Once the goals and primary content are assembled, then we *look at the form*. This is efficient for many reasons. Maybe the original idea was for a certain form factor (sell sheet), but the refined content will have more impact in another form (down to postcard or up to brochure.) Also, bare content can be more readily repurposed in other formats like web pages, videos, PowerPoint and more.

    From there, some give and take will be required to *develop the form and fine-tune fit the content* and visuals for best presentation. But once the objectives are clear and the copy is refined, that process will be easier to manage.

    When people tell you they have trouble getting started writing copy without a layout or graphic design to guide them/inspire them, they are really saying they don't know where to start. Their only stated goal at that point is to have a brochure in hand. The designers claiming they need content are really saying they are not the deciders of the function and outcomes from the piece.

    You make a good point regarding focus on benefits from features, but I take that further to a *focus on problem solving*. Challenge your attendees to have a laser focus on *problem identification and solution presentation* from the consumer's point-of-view (consumer generically meaning the person who will interact with the piece.) The best marketers can best identify the focus, priorities, values and patience of the consumer.

    That consumer focus, when adopted, should overcome the issues of we, us, features, too many words and lack of directing consumer to the best action. Look at marketing from Apple for prime example of these issues.

    There are more advanced things you can get into such as writing to personnas, the psychology of specific colors or visuals and layout placement, but start with the basic goals above which are required before advanced techniques will make a real difference.

    Hope this helps.

    -steve
  • Posted on Accepted
    The development of marketing materials requires a creative team that consists of an art director/designer and a copywriter. Neither comes "first." They work together, often in an iterative fashion.

    But a good creative team won't take on a project at all unless and until they have a clear and specific Creative Brief that lays out the objective, requirements, and strategy for whatever they're supposed to create. Preparing the Creative Brief is the client's job -- usually that of the product manager.


  • Posted by melissa.paulik on Member
    I almost always start with the design in mind as I would never want a product manager dictating it by what they write. Presuming they were able to do anything with any consistency, most pieces would be way longer than they need to be and rarely to the point. At the risk of generalizing, PMs do have a way of getting lost in the weeds.

    I usually recommend starting with design because creating a template helps my clients maintain consistency. Then PMs know what structure they need to stay within e.g. they have 400 words to set up the customer problem and 600 words to talk about the solution, room for two customer quotes and a graphic.

    That said, as a former PM turned copywriter, I would not let your average PM be the last word on copy. At least have someone who really is a writer edit it for clarity and readability. (and punctuation!)
  • Posted on Accepted
    Without wishing to rehash what others have said, I thought it may give you confidence to know that the process that david.boullata and mgoodman describe has been a successful one for me.

    I have found that a brief creative meeting after the circulation of the detailed design brief provides all parties with the inspiration they need. That's where the 'idea' David refers to is given life. I've found a good designer will be able to provide an estimated word cap based on the decisions reached at that meeting. Sure, there will always be some tweaking required, but by that stage, it's a team effort and the entire process is very collegial.
  • Posted by mlang on Author
    Thank you all for a quick response - I think totem especially and many of the rest of you have hit the nail on the head - it does appear to be stemming from not knowing where to start and a lack of direction/preparation via creative briefs.

    In a small company, people need to wear many hats - hence why our PM's are writing copy. As we grow from small to medium size company, having an inhouse design team is new and the designers are often pushed into designs they know won't work and are hesitant to speak up. My role (Marketing Communications Manager) is new for the company too.

    After 25+ years of product managers running the entire show, you can guess adaption to change is somewhat slow.

    I have been pushing for creative briefs to clarify vision, fine tune objectives and shorten our pipeline - the people who use them have seen results, and the people who don't (one of my above) see multiple revisions and longer turnaround times.

    Your answers support the vision I have where it is a collaborative effort starting before anyone writes or designs.


    Outside of certain press releases, product announcements where word count is limited and of course our electonic media ( e-newsletter/website), I have never personally experienced a situation where a template is provided before copy. My design team also has never worked in an area where they had to greek in copy to show what the end result would look like before recieving a word of copy. I just wanted to see if it may be common outside our little insular world.

    From Melissa's answer, it appears that it may be in some types of businesses.

  • Posted on Accepted
    Mary - I will summarise what I do in copy workshops:

    1. A direct marketing basic is to chose the best medium to reach your target market. That could be magazine insert, advertisement, email, DM pack, landing page, simple A4 letter etc.

    2. That first stage will then dictate your design format

    3. Your copwriter then creates copy for that format.

    4. The copywriter oversees the design. For example, the design MUST support the message in all ways.

    You can see that design is subordinate to the message in the copy. Design is there to support and reinforce the message and if at all possible, increase the impact.

    But you can only hope for 'increased impact' at higher levels of design. It is a real craft.

    As is 'copywriting':

    If you want your copy to sell a product or service, then you need a specialist who will already have a good grasp of all the above. If you just want business copy to explain and communicate, that is an easy task and there are hundreds of business journalists who do it, so you will have no problem keeping that in house.

    Hope that helps,

    Peter

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