Topic: Website Critique

Clear Message

Posted by Anonymous on 250 Points
Your expert opinion on how clear our message is to a prospect?
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Member
    I'm unclear what you're asking, Jorge. Can you be more specific?
  • Posted on Author
    hi Jay
    Appreciate , would like opinion on the website ,if the message is clear about what we do ? is it engaging ? are we trying to say too much? a general comment on the website ,we just launched it two days ago and still in time to review it .
  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Member
    Have you reached out to local homeowners to get their opinion?
    Quick impressions: banner animation is too distracting, not enough images of people LOVING their new home, not clear why you're the better choice, and poor choice of <title> tag.
  • Posted on Author
    Thks Jay
    Appreciate your comments thank you .
    Yes most people think the bus model is a great idea ,
    We are planning to create an animated video done professionally explaining the process /business explanation rather than the 3Dman that's been overused.
  • Posted by mgoodman on Accepted
    Banner animation is distracting and hard to read, with all upper-case letters, in reverse type, spaced out to cover the entire width of the page.

    Not enough emotional payoff or pictures of happy customers. Lots of sterile home shots instead.

    It's possible to figure out what you do, I suppose, but I probably wouldn't stick around to figure it out based on the homepage. You would do well to be less "clever" or "designed" (in overall look-and-feel) and more straightforward/clear/direct.
  • Posted on Author
    thank you "mgoodman"
    much appreciated agree that message needs to be more straightforward/clear/direct

    Appreciate your time

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