Topic: Website Critique

Is This Website To Busy Or Bland

Posted by Anonymous on 250 Points
I want to know if my website is too busy or to bland to attract customers and if download to slow
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  • Posted by Jay Hamilton-Roth on Accepted
    Too busy? Yes.
    But what's missing is clear statement of who you help, why they'd want your services, or why they should trust you.
  • Posted by Mike Steffes on Accepted
    Wow. It's like a carnival midway. There is probably still a group attracted to that style, though.
  • Posted by saratogahiker on Accepted
    It needs to be more clear who your are, what you do, and why people should do it with you (versus your competition). Spelling and grammar should be cleaned up, which will increase trustworthiness. As for page speed, I recommend you use "".
  • Posted by mgoodman on Accepted
    Way too busy.

    Who is the target audience? Why should they choose you? What benefit will they realize? The answers to these questions should be immediately obvious to anyone visiting your site.

    Site is hard to digest because the copy is all run together in a single paragraph, no clear message (words or images), and even the headline is not clear/visible. What are all those images in little squares? Where are the images of happy clients? Testimonials?

    If your site is a sample of what you would do for a client, I would be concerned that people might be turned off. Not professional looking.
  • Posted by Gary Bloomer on Accepted
    There are over 30 typographic, stylistic, and grammatical errors on your page. The flashing and animated square banners are visually distracting and navigationally confusing. There is no clear indication of what, exactly, you are offering, nor any clear path as to why your offer is a great deal.
  • Posted by mgoodman on Moderator
    Is the current version the improved version? If so, I think you're still missing the mark. But maybe your target audience likes that kind of site -- if they can figure out what's in it for them.
  • Posted by Shelley Ryan on Moderator
    Hi Everyone,

    I am closing this question since there hasn't been much recent activity.

    Thanks for participating!


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