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Topic: Website Critique

Still Not Launched

Posted by Anonymous on 2/8/2005 at 1:28 AM ET 125 Points

Right before launch of it, I want to be doubly sure, so I yet again invite all critiques/ faultfinders to examine/ evaluate the presentation available on www.thebigpromise.com.
Since the result of the Campaign has a direct bearing on my personal mission, the expertise of all my friends here can make it a successful venture.
I invite views on 3 aspects-
- creating a personal/ human touch with the visitor online which i tried using photographs
- creating a mysterious, yet romantic feel
- the power to absorb and indulge the visitor.
- additional ways to empahsize on a real life mission


every single comment will help my mission, tremendously.

with thanks again,
prashant

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  • Posted by Carl Crawford on 2/8/2005 at 6:41 AM Member
    "the website you requested does not exist"

    i think your page is down, post back went it is back up and i will have a look.

    Carl Crawford
  • Posted by Mushfique Manzoor on 2/8/2005 at 8:11 AM Accepted
    Dear Prashant

    what happened to you??? i really dont understand why you have placed the pic of Micheal Schummacher on the first page as background???

    then again, all your font colors are straining on eyes. your page 3 is totally waste, i could not read a single word with all those light and dark orange color fonts. The Last Chapter page is full of that FACE(may be yours) and the text is overshadowded by that. You still have very small font size and its straining. you have used Capital and Small letters too frequently and it hurts the eyes. furthermore, your price is lost in the write up. when you are selling something, prospective clients wnat to know the price.

    i thought you had updated the site after the last time you mailed me. now i see a complete different thing (and honestly, not better at all !!). see the reply Roxana posted to your last question, i am sure people will like the earlier updated site more.

    thats all for now, once you update, let us know

    cheers!!
  • Posted by Carl Crawford on 2/8/2005 at 10:17 AM Accepted
    Oh i see now, there is a dot at the end of the link.

    Ok you should really learn to write html, or get a designer. It is very easy to learn HTML.

    Your site has SIDE scrolling ( BIG NO NO).

    I couldn't read the text, and you need to hyper link the text at the bottom of the page so that i know it is a link.

    Do you have permission to use Michael Schumacher likeness on your page? He could sue you for copy right infringement ( i think).

    I would be willing to make a page for you for a very small price but i am very busy at the moment with other projects.

    Here are some sites that can teach you some basic html.

    https://www.davesite.com/webstation/html/

    and you can get some web page templates here:

    https://sitewww.ru/index.php?id=templates (i know the site is in Russian but the templates are in English)

    my email is in my profile if you would like to contact me

    Carl Crawford
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