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Subject Line For B2b Energy Savings Promo Email?
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I'm working on a B2B campaign that offers businesses a free energy savings audit and lighting retrofit program that can save companies hundreds of dollars per month on their electric bill.
We are having problems attracting interest via email and are really surprised when it is such a win/win proposition for companies. We offer a free audit and a no upfront cost financing plan based on their monthly electrical savings that is cash flow positive from day one with a quick ROI.
I'm preparing another email blast to decision makers of our best target market businesses in our area and would love your suggestions on a compelling subject line.
The subject line I used on an initial blast to 2500 businesses. I used "No-Risk Solution to Cut Your Energy Bills in Half" --No responses
I've also used "Save Up to 80% on Lighting Bills Without Replacing Fixtures" --No responses
Here are some subject lines other I've considered:
A real solution to end rising energy costs
Concerned about rising energy bills? We can help
Free energy audit can save you 80%!
I'd love some other ideas!
Thanks so much!
The one that we used before was "Save 80% on Lighting Bills Without Replacing Fixtures"