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Re: Question Ea/qst_question.asp?qstid=46027
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Reference: Q No. 46027
In acting on your advice, I took the simplest way forward as my first move. I simply removed the word 'however' from my invitation message. I sent out the new invitation as:
'LinkedIn gave me your name as a person in my sector, venture capital. We are on opposite sides of the project funding equation, so would you like to connect with me & explore how we could collaborate to help each other?'
Since receiving your advice, I have sent 165 invitations using this new invitation message and received 84 acceptances. This has increased my success rate from 27% to 51%.
I am just posting this to say a sincere thank you for your advice.
I will continue tweaking.
All the best,
Graham