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Help Me To Learn How To "surprise Broca"
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I am wanting to learn more about how to write engaging and memorable copy for my business ads and Web site. I am a mostly left-brained but right-brained capable.
I am writing some copy for a new service I am offering to Craigslist.org users in the Chicagoland area and thought this the perfect time to ask for assistance.
Below is my version. I do not want someone to write it for me, but "guide" me in the right direction--give my right-brain some exercise.
Help me to learn how to fish for myself.
Thank you in advance.
K. Chris Caldwell
Headline:
Computer and Technology Recycling
Copy:
Wow! You have a new computer and boy is it fast, much faster than your old one. The old one that has served you so well and for so long.
A landfill doesn't seem a fitting end for an old but trusty friend like your old computer, and it's bad for the environment to boot. You picture someone else smiling as they use your old computer to fulfill their dreams, but how do you get it to them?
Connect Computer Services will pick it up from you for free and see to it that your friend is well treated and given a new home.
312-602-2555