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Topic: Copywriting

Is This A Good Opening Paragraph?

Posted by Anonymous on 300 Points
I’ve just rewritten the opening paragraph of the website www.tourisminsight.com. It is short with only four sentences. I wonder how well it is written regarding introducing the site to new visitors. What will the readers think the site is all about based on this opening statement? All comments would be greatly appreciated!

Best regards,
Rune Dalfelt
www.tourisminsight.com
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